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Don’t drop but look at new anime , cartoons , and manga to add to the story mix

Fix the spacing

Make the restaurant owner not over pellet character outside, please but just inside his back so it’s more believable and let them go down the characters in the old university and their timeline. Heck adventure with each patriots comes in to the restaurant that way you don’t have to always think of multiple ones, but just to one and then go to the next world that you feel your character can help or just hang there mini arts look at new characters I suggest the monsters the guy that becomes the goblin or the incarnated as the seventh Prince go to all anime and you find doesn’t of world that you can use as a base

I love the concept and I would like to keep reading more of it. Don’t give up on this story. Some people rarely put reviews on the power stones that will get you peoples interest.

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I would suggest doing either Fnaf VR or a type of card game where the cards actually come to life in VR so it has its own spin to it

Good luck my dude

Since that Batman is a powerhouse now make the villain 20 times more powerful Denver comic park or even merge them with their ultimate version so that way just league is needed and you don’t have to downgrade him

I would say go to Spartan route, then give him the XG so it’s will help him more. Don’t make it like techno Mancy try going for boost in smarts so it’s more aligned with his tech system.

Kate the fear bringer

How about an adaptive swarm your day that to the people that are attacking so it will be ever evolving