Webnovel Author: Stardreamer12 - Novel Collection

i like historical fiction and I also like the way you described the background of the characters, it was perfect. The author provided vivid descriptions of the scenes that allow the reader to see the story unfold before them. Honestly, I can't find any mistakes in your story, so good job on writing it. I truly enjoyed reading it

Firstly, I would like to say that I enjoyed your story. It was well-written with vivid descriptions and good dialogue. The book had a nice flow to the story, and I particularly enjoyed the characters, especially Luiz. Keep up the good work, author

Your story was excellent! Your vivid descriptions of the scenes helped me to visualize the world you created, and the natural dialogue between the characters kept me engaged throughout. Your writing style is fantastic, and I found the characters to be well-developed and relatable. The plot was intriguing and kept me hooked until the end, and the background information you provided added depth and richness to the story. Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your book and would love to see more from you in the future. Keep up the great work, author!

I find the story to be interesting and engaging. The concept of the protagonist becoming a terminally ill extra in a novel, and her attempt to maintain her character while dealing with her illness, is captivating. The addition of a system adds an intriguing element to the plot. The scene with the elites and the prince effectively sets up the protagonist's struggle to fit into higher society, and her sudden illness adds tension to the story. Overall, the author is doing a good job, and I look forward to seeing how the plot develops.

Your story was really good! Your writing style is captivating and makes it easy for the reader to understand the story. Your descriptions are vivid and the dialogue is perfect. I especially like how you portrayed the two princesses, Estella and Elesha. Your portrayal of them was great! I also appreciate the creative idea of using Princess Elesha as a substitute for her sister's marriage.

Okay, so I like your story, especially the idea that the protagonist is the only remaining Nascent bloodline. You have a nice plot and a good theme. Chapters 1 and 2 are already okay since you've put a lot of description and enough dialogue between the characters, making the reader really know what's happening. However, in Chapter 1, I feel like it lacks dialogue and relies too much on descriptions. So, I suggest that the author writes more dialogue to balance it out. Your story is good, so keep it up, author

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thank you 😊

Thank you for your honest feedback, and I will surely take your suggestions into consideration

Your story has a nice plot and good writing style. The vivid descriptions were great and I especially appreciated being able to imagine the scenes and expressions of the characters. For example, when you described how Ryan solved the question and how his teacher Mr. Johnson and classmates were shocked by his intelligence, it made me feel like I was really inside the scene. However, I feel that the dialogue was lacking and suggest that you incorporate more of it. Overall, your story had a good flow and will probably gather many readers with a little revision and more updates. Before concluding this review, I want to say good job to the author. You wrote a great story that I enjoyed and I am looking forward to more updates.

First and foremost, I must say that I enjoyed reading your story the most. The way you described the characters of Duncan and Fiona was great, and their behavior was kind of funny. You also provided good dialogue with vivid descriptions. I loved the bravery of Fiona, especially in the first chapter where she punched her boyfriend - I found that scene quite funny. You have a nice plot and writing style, so I just want to say good job!

Your story was good, but I feel like there's something missing. I can't quite remember what it is, but honestly, it was a good read. There were some typos, but overall, the plot was good and the character development was fine.

Thank you for the advice 🥰

Wow, I like the way you wrote the story, especially your English. It was awesome and easy to understand. I also liked the way you described the story and portrayed the emotions of the characters and their backgrounds. However, I noticed that sometimes you didn't mention the name of the protagonist, which made me forget his name. The only names I remembered were Sofia and Sebastian. But overall, it was a good story. I especially liked chapter 3, which was full of emotion as the protagonist saw the corpse of Sebastian. If you update more often, you will probably gather many readers.