Webnovel Author: DiesWrites - Novel Collection

Overall, the story is good and some parts can be fixed, but it's definitely a hidden gem, just a bit unpolished. The writing sometimes makes several words capitalized for some reason, which is odd, but other than that, nothing else really stuck out. For now, I recommend the dear author to reflect the emotions of the characters first to make their attributes shine and differentiate them from anybody else. Sometimes, you can even just brute force it and straight up just tell us what the characters are feeling and how they deal with this emotion, good or bad. Overall, it's pretty good, but can be even better.