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ch 18 The Rose and the Blood Thorn
Fantasy · Dash_vin
I really appreciate it, thank you! I'm happy you've loved it sofar. You're going to adore the upcoming chapters, I'm sure. Again, thank you! <3
Fantasy · VeraMera
Thank you very much! I'm delighted you've enjoyed it so far! I hope you'll continue to support my novel <3
Thank you for reading and finding my writing to date enjoyable! I'm constantly striving to improve so that you, the reader, have a wonderful reading experience with my novel. I'm hoping you will support it in the future! <3
I appreciate your time and interest in my novel so far. To give readers like you a fantastic reading experience when reading my book, I'm constantly working to improve. I hope you'll continue to support it! <3
Thank you for reading and enjoying my work so far! I'm trying to be better to provide readers like you a great experience when reading my novel. I hope you continue to support it! <3
A great read! I would suggest writing a blurb or synopsis in the novel to attract more readers because this is a hidden gem! The plot flows nicely and the character engagement is superb. A wonderful read and I can't wait for more chapters!
Fantasy · Harley_pen
A fantastic read thus far! The plot is intriguing, and the flow of the story is simple to understand and follow. The reader's engagement in the world won't be affected by a few minor grammar mistakes. Did I also add how well the author created the world in this book? You could have been there because of the way they depicted the scene and the action. Good job and I'm adding this to my collection! Keep up the good work <3
Urban · Jenival_Enyia
ch 10 A New World
The storyline so far is great. I like that you didn't sugarcoat any of the harshnesses of the mafia - it adds to the realness and reading experience. It's not all lovey-dovey romance, it's a real-life drama which I like and I don't see often here. The flow of the story is great and it leaves you wanting more. Keep up the good work!
Realistic · Moonwriting
A great read all around. I kinda like that the chapters are long, it makes me feel like I'm reading a real paperback book, and it's easy to get lost in your world-building and storyline. The way you write the emotions that the characters are feeling is superb, you try to express it in words so that the readers can feel it too. Added to my collection! A great read indeed :)
History · SoniiNaaz
A great read so far! A few grammatical errors here and there, but the plot makes you kinda forget it while reading since it flows so well. Keep up the good work! As a fix for your grammar, you can try having the chapter checked or run through a grammar checker first.
Fantasy · Tokio999
A very unique storyline. Can't wait for more! The pacing is great and I would like to see more of how their story develops. Keep up the good work!
Urban · Aciee_GelaTin
Great story so far! The plot is easy to follow and keeps you wanting to read it until there are no more chapters. What's cool about it is it's based loosely on Indian mythology, which is rare here in webnovel. I hope you will release more chapters, author since I'm dying to know what happens next! GREAT WORK! AUTHOR!
History · Pole_Star
A good read so far! The pacing is nice and easy flowing, and the way you kntroduce your character is great! I usually dont read this kind of novel due to my lack of knowledge of cultivation, but it's so interesting that I had to know what comes next! Definitely added to my collection
Fantasy · leeroycgna
Sun and Moon! The flow of the story is easy to follow and I really enjoyed how you made the ML and FL into very unique characters so far. I kept reading it until I finished all of the available chapters, and I want more :) Keep it up, you have a great novel in your hands :)
History · DollhousX
Great story flow and pacing! The characters are easy to imagine and root for. Keep up the good work! I enjoyed it so far and I'm looking forward to new chapters from you :)
Urban · Eva_Smith_0875
Thank you, thank you! I'm glad you liked it so far!
Thank you very much for your review! I hope you continue to support my novel, there will be many twists in the future :) Thank you again!
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it so far. The general summary of my volume one is already complete, and I'm sure you're gonna love the next chapters to come. Thank you again!
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ch 18 The Rose and the Blood Thorn
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Fantasy · Dash_vin