Moments 2
Commented
add "in" to "wheels turning your mind"
“Yes, Professor Thelete. Unfortunately, I would like to discuss more with you but my superior has not given me any more information regarding this. I can see the wheels turning your mind. I will leave you my card and the card of my superior. Just think it over, please.” Alkis stated with a warm smile and then walked out of the office.
Professor Thelete and the Atlantis Code
Fantasy · Nathaniel Heutmaker
add "a" to "wait minute" and a comma after "minute".
“Hey, wait minute come back here!” The professor shouted after him. The professor ran out of his office, but by the time that he had done so, Alkis was long gone.
Professor Thelete and the Atlantis Code
Fantasy · Nathaniel Heutmaker