It's pretty good. From what I've read the characters feel somewhat real with a lot of emotions which was something that I really liked. I didn't spot any grammar mistake, so I guess the writing quality is good. The story is developing smoothly, and it's quite fast-paced which I liked a lot. A lot is going on, so you can't really get bored reading. I'd say this is a excellent book that is worth reading.
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Great Start! Really liked it
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Cool Story with good characters. The world they are in is quite interesting. However, the way you write dialogues could be improved you should check out how other novels write it.
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Talentless Manipulator: I Can Exploit Other Players' Talents!
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