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This fic has too many flaws my friend which seems too basic and idiotic for someone of your calibre You are telling me ohashi let orochimaru take everything without any precautions, basic ninja rules are forgotten , ohashi is 9 yr old with power and don't even say about hokage Have you really read Naruto or seen cuz ohashi is acting much more idiotic that Naruto from the beginning
As the Yellow Flash faced this dilemma, his sensei found himself on Mt. Myoboku once more, as he stood in front of the Great Sage Toad, who seemed to be in a rather somber mood, something rather unlike the usually jovial toad who spoke up.
SHIMMERING MIST : HATAKE SI (Naruto)
Anime & Comics · Drkest
yes inorder for the plot to proceed ohashi wouldn't destroy this cave or other things so that orochimaru can access it knowing perfectly what happens in the future is he for real ?
In another corner of the same village, a snake slithered on the ground, stopping as it reached the remains of a cave that seemed to have only recently caved in, and then moments later, a shin obi stepped out of the shadow stepping up beside the small snake, which slithered up his leg, as he looked at the destroyed cave with glinting golden irises.
SHIMMERING MIST : HATAKE SI (Naruto)
Anime & Comics · Drkest
when's the next update bro it's been more than a week now
ch 38 CHapter 38
SHIMMERING MIST : HATAKE SI (Naruto)
Anime & Comics · Drkest
didn't you think the possibility of you being a retard and just leave this platform
ch 36 Chapter 36
SHIMMERING MIST : HATAKE SI (Naruto)
Anime & Comics · Drkest
seriously this is Gotham ... if joker kills millions still he'll not kill ?so far this looks like cheap copy of Batman author ,nothing else no personal identity, or characterisation of his own to see let's hope this isnt true
"We cannot become animals, Selina, for otherwise, what would separate me from a man like Falcone," he said, and she gritted her teeth as she held his face in her hands.
White Knight-Batman SI
Movies · Drkest
where is the today's chapter
ch 79 Chapter 1: Beyond the Code
The Cricket Match That Changed Everything
Sports · wheretonow
you should read or watch jjk first before writing otherwise this also plotholes would be more than chapters written
A/N: Hey guys, I've got this brilliant idea of a ff about Sukuna. Which world should I choose? Please share ideas.
In Jujutsu Kaisen with Time Cursed Technique
Anime & Comics · David_555
it's actually you who has issues when being pointed out with mistakes you act like 9 yr old who has been denied of candy and gets offended and angry
A/N: [ Some of you guys keep complaining about how mc moves at Mach 3 and could've stopped the RPG. Quicksilver in Marvel is said to move faster than sound, yet he died to a bullet. It's called plot holes in the canon. It's necessary for story to move on the next phase. Deal with it suckers!!🤣🤣🤣]
MARVEL: GODSPEED
Movies · David_555
but that doesn't mean you make the mc retard now, do you even for plotholes...
A/N: [ Some of you guys keep complaining about how mc moves at Mach 3 and could've stopped the RPG. Quicksilver in Marvel is said to move faster than sound, yet he died to a bullet. It's called plot holes in the canon. It's necessary for story to move on the next phase. Deal with it suckers!!🤣🤣🤣]
MARVEL: GODSPEED
Movies · David_555
hope that this fic would help you to develop other fics and to avoid many mistakes and plotholes you made...
A/N: 😔 Didnt want to continue with this ff anymore.
In Jujutsu Kaisen with Time Cursed Technique
Anime & Comics · David_555
you need to rewrite bro imo it's really getting bad the writing's cringe,plot doesn't make sense and you are trying to protray some mc whos'sfacing hardships but only the thing is that is the mc seems a retard and cringe
ch 71 Boundaries Betrayed
The Cricket Match That Changed Everything
Sports · wheretonow
author rarely researches or thinks before writing the fic ,same with jjk fic and gets offended when pointed out..
ch 18 Entering the Speed Force
MARVEL: GODSPEED
Movies · David_555
why don't you kill his future wife and children if he has as well cuz I'm pretty sure mach3 is much faster than rpg
However, no one could escape the shackles of fate and destiny. The RPG being already so close to the shelter exploded, as time back to normal and massive shockwave exploded forth sending him flying a couple of meters backwards as he smashed into a building behind him.
MARVEL: GODSPEED
Movies · David_555
glad to know that i don't want him to be superhuman neither a run of mill player i wanted him to be realistic goat player perhaps better than Sachin Tendulkary'know what i am trying to say making huge impacts in the game with his masterclass techniques due to the wishes and his practice
ch 67 Mumbai Bombings 2006
The Cricket Match That Changed Everything
Sports · wheretonow
I meant in cricket not in superhuman way as he seems normal player rather than a special one
ch 67 Mumbai Bombings 2006
The Cricket Match That Changed Everything
Sports · wheretonow
finna be sticking here for a while hoping that next fic turns out to be better than this one with poor plot tbh anyways well tried and loved it to an extent
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SHIMMERING MIST : HATAKE SI (Naruto)
Anime & Comics · Drkest