Tungi

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Thanks for the chapter

ch 62 Parting ways with the saint

Mr. Voidwalker

Fantasy · VoidCeremonist

Tungi

1yr

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Epic

ch 57 A familiar seal (1)

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Tungi

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Thanks for the chapter

ch 50 The Labyrinth Maze (3)

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Tungi

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thanks for the chapter

ch 33 Escape (2)

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Tungi

1yr

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Best chapter so far, the feeling of guilt was greatly portrayed.🫶👌

ch 25 Lost Ruin of Drazuba (3)

Mr. Voidwalker

Fantasy · VoidCeremonist

Tungi

1yr

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so sad :sob:, really good chapter.

ch 23 Lost Ruin of Drazuba (1)

Mr. Voidwalker

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Tungi

1yr

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good stuff

ch 22 Rumors (4)

The plot and the lore of the clan are very interesting. I really want to know more of the clan it’s history. The villains seems really promising tho, as well as Sia. In some paragraphs the writing style seems a bit off, but overall still nice. I don’t really like personality of Rione. Musashi and Sia are likeable though. Story looks promising, looking forward.

The Dragon of Akiyame

Fantasy · Makashima

Tungi

1yr

Commented

good chapter

ch 19 Rumors (1)

Mr. Voidwalker

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Tungi

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Amazing

ch 18 An extraordinary professor (2)

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Tungi

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wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

ch 17 An extraordinary professor (1)

Mr. Voidwalker

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Tungi

1yr

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Thanks for the chapter🦧

ch 15 The new professors (1)

Mr. Voidwalker

Fantasy · VoidCeremonist

Tungi

1yr

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The world building in this story is really great, places are well explained and are easy to imagine. It feels fluid reading it, although it it sometimes unclear whos talking. The main protagonist is very interesting and mysterious and you want to find out more about him. The side characters are also cool. In this story I see alot of potential, since the author built up alot of places to explore.