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1yr

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a touching moment, I really like it. However, I think digging deeper into the character's attitude would be more meaningful. It reminds me of my family.

For him, Dan appeared as a gift from God, he felt the fullness of life when he held the cold little hands at the door of the house. He still vividly remembers the moment when he hurriedly walked from the house to his wife's side, his eyes widened as he looked at the sleeping baby, which he could never have imagined in his life. The day he and his wife decided to raise the child was the day he reminded himself to be a gentle father. Leaving his original position in a high place is something he has never regretted, he has never been a father in his life this is the first time he has taken on a new role. Struggling, embarrassed when he hugged Dan for the first time, touched and softened his heart because of the lovely child with an angelic smile, the sight of a tall man embracing a small, beautiful, sacred child. Additional info. It is a picture as beautiful as the picture of motherhood.

My lovely secret

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do_Anne

1yr

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I find it interesting. smart writer because it is quite literary work. I think it will be suitable for someone who want to dig deeper into their feeling, brain.[img=coins]

My lovely secret

Fantasy · Annedo

do_Anne

1yr

Commented

i love this chapter, but it's quite short[img=recommend]

ch 0 2 DAILY LIFE

My lovely secret

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