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I do want drama, but I don’t want stupid unnecessary drama. Eve is obviously main girl material, but dominating Anissa is a whole other dream my friend. Just throwing it out there. Great story love it, best online at the moment.

Pls soon upload again, this story is way to good to stop😭

Im not really a fan of the other story, but this one is quite good. Im a apprecitive lurker. If that’s the word. I don’t like to leave comments that often. But this is a good story, I can name a few OP ff that I truly like, but this is one of them. Keep it up man.

Im gonna give my stones and wish for a second ch.

That’s not okay, dropped by the second, wtf no. And I liked this story. :(

I truly dont like Fhenrir, she is fucking annoying and only a sounce of stress. The absolute worst character in this entire story. It just feels like she was added to justify the author pedofilic thoughts.

Like it, didnt like her charcter anyways.

I really don’t like Henry and John. I assume you’re trying to make two ignorant characters with development to grow. But they don’t seem ignorant, they seem stupid. They don’t add value to the story. And I don’t know if you’re trying to pass them off as comedic relief, but it just falls kind of flat. Just my thoughts tho. Plus the mc doesn’t seem smart regurgitating definitions that sound like a google search awnser.

Its just straight up spoiling your own story at this point. Make some better ch titles or don’t put the titles in this little ad you’re doing, it’s annoying and honestly puts a damper on the experience in reading newer ch.

Get better soon, love the story.

Its a good explanation, but your other characters leave much to be desired. Why is he telling this to these two random guys? And they aren’t even intelligent or seem to be companion material. You lack some depth in this story.

Well I guess there is still time for more character development before canon, if canon still happens.

This was a weird chapter, it didn’t feel real and not in a good way. Maybe it’s the stupid comic relief people that ruin it for me. It doesn’t feel like it matched the flow/mood of the story so far. Plus shouldn’t Adam be a lot more sophisticated/adaptable/Manipulative/well spoken and thoughtful after 4000+ years? He just still some random guy, now with abilities and stuff. I think there is a profound lack of character development.

Youre really good at making these battles very vivid in my head. Nice way of describing the events.

Love this story, im just waiting and watching to see what you’re gonna do with it. Keep it up man. :)

Haven’t read your other story but it looks intriguing, gonna give it a shot.

This ch was low trash tier quality…

The translation has gone down Hill.

The story is just too slow and too slowly updating for me to get excited about it. Quality wise it is good enough, but the story and plot should not take this long to write and develop. I understand if this is just your hobby concepts that you do when you have time. But nothing is happening and if you want some actual interaction and experience with your writing, you need to write some more. Because just having quality up to standards isn’t enough if you want your story to have an fan base and interactions.