Pls soon upload again, this story is way to good to stop😭
ch 295 Chapter 295
Anime & Comics · SoftCrow
Im not really a fan of the other story, but this one is quite good. Im a apprecitive lurker. If that’s the word. I don’t like to leave comments that often. But this is a good story, I can name a few OP ff that I truly like, but this is one of them. Keep it up man.
ch 163 [162] The Fishman Royal Family
Anime & Comics · Master4thWall
Im gonna give my stones and wish for a second ch.
ch 19 I am home
Movies · Emmanuel_Capricorn
That’s not okay, dropped by the second, wtf no. And I liked this story. :(
ch 393 Marin's New Idea (R-18)
Anime & Comics · SixthSense1029
Like it, didnt like her charcter anyways.
ch 190 Chapter LIII: Royal Rumble
Video Games · Rastislav
Like John Doe? Lol
Realizing he hadn't properly introduced himself, the Reaper decided to clarify. "I am Death, but not bound to a single universe. I preside over the entirety of the multiverse. Just call me John… Death isn't much of a name, you know."
Movies · AlienWarlord
I really don’t like Henry and John. I assume you’re trying to make two ignorant characters with development to grow. But they don’t seem ignorant, they seem stupid. They don’t add value to the story. And I don’t know if you’re trying to pass them off as comedic relief, but it just falls kind of flat. Just my thoughts tho. Plus the mc doesn’t seem smart regurgitating definitions that sound like a google search awnser.
ch 63 breakfast
Movies · Beans_on_a_tree
Get better soon, love the story.
ch 127 Chapter 124: Halthor Sector Campaign Episode II
Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
Its a good explanation, but your other characters leave much to be desired. Why is he telling this to these two random guys? And they aren’t even intelligent or seem to be companion material. You lack some depth in this story.
ch 59 a quick lesson then reveal
Movies · Beans_on_a_tree
Well I guess there is still time for more character development before canon, if canon still happens.
ch 58 attemted explanation and a battle of wit
Movies · Beans_on_a_tree
This was a weird chapter, it didn’t feel real and not in a good way. Maybe it’s the stupid comic relief people that ruin it for me. It doesn’t feel like it matched the flow/mood of the story so far. Plus shouldn’t Adam be a lot more sophisticated/adaptable/Manipulative/well spoken and thoughtful after 4000+ years? He just still some random guy, now with abilities and stuff. I think there is a profound lack of character development.
ch 58 attemted explanation and a battle of wit
Movies · Beans_on_a_tree
Haven’t read your other story but it looks intriguing, gonna give it a shot.
ch 23 Announcement [Regarding The Novel: Omniversal Mercenary ]
Anime & Comics · Marveller
This ch was low trash tier quality…
ch 184 Ch 182 - 16 June, Takao 07
Anime & Comics · RazackCh
The translation has gone down Hill.
ch 293 Chapter 291: The Method Of Persuading Ayane!
Anime & Comics · Novelette_Seeker
The story is just too slow and too slowly updating for me to get excited about it. Quality wise it is good enough, but the story and plot should not take this long to write and develop. I understand if this is just your hobby concepts that you do when you have time. But nothing is happening and if you want some actual interaction and experience with your writing, you need to write some more. Because just having quality up to standards isn’t enough if you want your story to have an fan base and interactions.
ch 22 A Sudden Attack
Anime & Comics · Marveller
I do want drama, but I don’t want stupid unnecessary drama. Eve is obviously main girl material, but dominating Anissa is a whole other dream my friend. Just throwing it out there. Great story love it, best online at the moment.
ch 10 10: From another world
Almost Invincible (Invincible SI)
Anime & Comics · EmmaCruzader