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I'm up to chapter 61, I'm not interested in downloading the application or paying for this xd Until next time, my friends. They are cared for, loved and loved.

I'm back, sorry. She had left this place. Recommendations. Blind swordsman, you can read it at nobelmtl. Release that witch, novel. The comic is ugly. Silver rank gatekeeper, noblemtl Transmigrated into a tragic romantic fantasy. There is an English version, but I read it from the Korean version. Turns Out I’m a Great Cultivator, Novel. You can read on mtlnovel. Divine Beast Adventures. Let Me Game in Peace. I have forgotten the names of some really good ones, since I changed cell phones, I read from the Chinese or Korean versions.

Well yes, but people got used to reading these types of stories and they say, "Ahh! This is very good!" When in reality it is just another of the masses. Instead of thinking, “There's still a long way to go, I'll be getting better,” the author says, “Okay. I hope you find something better”, as if this were the best, that shows how little self-criticism he has. There are definitely many better stories than this, write to me and I'll send them to you. I give you my recommendations. English is not my native language.

The story became disgusting. I've read a lot of novels with these kinds of brain circuits, and I always say; The logic they use is very stupid and nonsensical. Personalities like this make the character lack value and depth. The idea was appealing, the beginning was a pleasure, but it became generic and not to mention the speed with which the author destroyed Katara's original personality, typical use of worthless female characters. But what surprises me the most is the ease and speed with which the author decides to destroy the personalities of the characters by adding a few great touches of foolishness, immaturity and stupidity. Like those Chinese fan fictions where they completely degrade the original characters. In short: Generic. If you like these types of stories, you will surely love. Not to mention other aspects that he does not mention. this one. My native language is not English. The sad thing is that a lot of people like this kind of story developed under the standard of a protagonist with no personality. It kills without batting an eyelid anyone who tries to "harm" it, even if it is because of a great misunderstanding with justification (where the main culprit is the protagonist), thus ruining the possibilities of a more coherent, solid and deep development with the addition of more characters and roles that give life to the plot.

All right, the only good thing is the world, the rest urgently needs an editor and more writing skills.

It's interesting, but the internal dialogues and monologues are very childish, even the development of the story itself. I hope that over time you will improve those not so mature aspects. Luck!

Unnecessarily long paragraphs, little use of periods. I couldn't stand reading after he revealed his reincarnation and the plot objects, but the main problem that made me abandon the story was the text structure and dialogue arrangement.