I like how the story unfolds and develops from the beginning until now. Maybe just a few tweaks here and there, but overall, it's okay. [img=recommend] I'd suggest adding a bit more action or something to propel the story forward. You might already have your own plan, but hey, I'm just sharing my opinion. Still, it's pretty good overall.[img=Smug][img=Smug]
Fantasy · Ivy_Floria
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I like how the story unfolds and develops from the beginning until now. Maybe just a few tweaks here and there, but overall, it's okay. [img=recommend] I'd suggest adding a bit more action or something to propel the story forward. You might already have your own plan, but hey, I'm just sharing my opinion. Still, it's pretty good overall.[img=Smug][img=Smug]
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Fantasy · Ivy_Floria