I assuming his is your first time writing, it's good. More effort needed, except MC, other character look good to me. Story need to slow and explained. World Background null, give it a time.
Eastern · NathanPresotto
sure enough, f**k if he just more careful at time of his weeding night, his will never happen and he got all women's also
ch 11 Chapter-11 ( Evil spirit )
Eastern · Xuefang1
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
I assuming his is your first time writing, it's good. More effort needed, except MC, other character look good to me. Story need to slow and explained. World Background null, give it a time.
My Wife is the Sect Leader
Eastern · NathanPresotto