Knight_Noctis - Profile

why would yuta try anything with maki if rika is alive ?

not really. Conflict wouldn't just niye happen if they knew each other . Mankind always heard the unknown . One or another way, it'd happen . It may happen in a large scale or small, but it'd happen regardless .

If it gets more attention for being pg-13, then go for it . I know he's famous, but more fame for being a family-friendly director wouldn't hurt. But try not to compromise the action scenes much .

I thought that it was something unique . This way of getting op is pretty much common . I'd rather read a story about mc with a generic lucario than a mc who gets fed by the system. I'm still not gonna judge by 2 chapters in . Let's see

yes

feels like author trying to nerf the mc or make him underperform . But one thing is for sure, it's dragging on for too long. Hoping that it would end in next 2-3 chapters

you're overcomplicating the relationship. it doesn't matter much if mc and hermoine ends up together. Just go with the flow .

I hope you'll try to at least flesh out the writing. It's moving so erratically. For example, Ash aura ability was never questioned or why he's all of a sudden training so hard ?

I'm not sure if this is a translation or not, but I'm glad someone is actually writing with someone being born as Ash. I haven't seen many fanfic touches upon this. Ash had so many failures that I couldn't sometimes help but think what would happen if someone else did it in his body. I'm glad that someone is writing it finally

I don't mind watson being a female main character. But that's probably for the future , I guess.

is this the same froakie of ash ? does ash exist in this timeline?

bruh , the foundation should have her captured long time ago. The foundation which have reality controlling devise can't captured a simple safe shifting ability. Come on , you're not really selling it. Also, she's a hoe

so is this story also dropped?

I don't get the point of giving him the fking ofa if you're going to make him just nerfed . I know you want to make him smart, but honestly, it really isn't working . It feels forced . The main point of Mha fabfics is quirks, and when it's time to show off his skills , you try to nerf him. You have already done it one , now this again. Honestly, he shouldn't even win ,it's just blatant use of plot armor

I don't like it . it has too many games like elements. Few, I don't mind, but this is too much . It feels like one on one duel in real life, which is I'm not a fan of.

so he just met athletes (I'm not sure if those Asian ones are real or not) because of curiosity. That's dumb af . Seems he's git lots of time in hand.

Not gonna lie . I'm not a fan of these fast & Furious movies. Especially after fast five , everything was pretty much downgrade. I hope our mc won't be in this franchise much.