Very good overall story, it could use some better character and world building. I believe the fight scenes could also use some work. Keep going and I think that this could be a very good story.
Sci-fi · MetalgearFoxy
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Very good overall story, it could use some better character and world building. I believe the fight scenes could also use some work. Keep going and I think that this could be a very good story.
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Sci-fi · MetalgearFoxy