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I love the story so far! The story line is really interesting and it makes the reader want to read more of it. The manner in which the author describes the characters helps the reader to imagine the characters in a very vivid manner, making the story more enjoyable. I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work, author👍

The story is actually really enjoyable to read. It is well-paced and the character development is pretty good too. I would recommend this story to everyone who likes romantic stories within a business environment. Keep it up, author!☺️

I love the story so far. The story line flows naturally, and your grammar isn't too bad. The story really interests me, especially since I want to be a doctor one day. Can't wait to see what happens next😊 keep up the good work, author!

The first chapter of this story immediately pulls the reader into a completely new world. The back stories of the characters are touching, and the manner in which the author describes every detail of the character's actions is excellent. All the characters in the story are very unique, especially Henry. I can't wait to read this story further. Keep up the good work author!

The story is very interesting. The names of the characters in the story suit their unique personalities. I like how well-paced the story is. It is very easy to read, and it is also very easy for the reader to engage with the characters. Introducing Hamlyn as a new student in the school perfectly illustrates the beginning of what the reader is about to experience with Hamlyn. Hamlyn seems like a very interesting character to discover (I've read the first four chapters so far), and I look forward to finding out what happens next in the story. Keep up the good work, author!😊

I read the first chapter and I'm already hooked to the story! The story is very interesting and it immediately pulls the readers attention. The author's use of descriptive word is excellent. Keep up the good work, author😁

This is a pretty interesting story❤️. The character development is good and so is the story development. I love how you illustrated the rare occurrence of new students coming into that boarding school. It made me more curious about the new student, Freddy. However, I would recommend working on your use of punctuation and grammar in your story. And also try telling the audience more about the characters themselves. Don't just describe the clothes the characters are wearing. But those are minor things you can work on. Overall, the story is really good. Keep up the good work👍😉

I LOVE how the story begins with the reader being pulled into the character's state of mind❤️ the character development within the first chapter is excellent, and the pacing of the story is pretty good too. The part that had me on my toes was the end of the first chapter, "The vampire and the priestess". I want to read more of this story🤩 keep up the good work!

The story is really interesting so far. The character development of Dae-hyun is really good, and so is the pacing of your story. Keep up the good work!