oh I thought that was the other one... shrio? they both have fragments or did I miss who they were talking about?
ch 281 Parents
Fantasy · Tasty_Dragon
no I think it's decent. I don't know how far along the arc you are, but you could have held back the fact that she's a fragment and just kind of make us guess that she is. based of how she's acting but other than that it's okay it doesn't feel like it's rushed. it is going to be interesting though if Stella comes back in this arc and is like you've got fragments all around you can you not see them or tell?
ch 281 Parents
Fantasy · Tasty_Dragon
well you're not wrong. Though I did think he was somehow related.
ch 280 Resting at the Estate
Fantasy · Tasty_Dragon
this reminds me of two other very special people in another of his books.
"One last time, let's do this!" Lux clicked the last upgrade and chose to add another +100 points to Eiko's intelligence, as well as another Summon for her. This time, he chose the Angel Slime to complement the Devil Slime. They made a great pair that would protect Eiko at all times.
Fantasy · Elyon
yeah that's what I thought as well also this is the first time for Greek myth to be seen? only have read the book with Ella goat fully.
"Arion," Lux said softly. "From now on, your name will be Arion. The mighty horse that the heroes rode into battle."
Fantasy · Elyon
I was wondering...
'Oh my!' Vera covered her own lips as she gave her granddaughter two thumbs up in her heart. 'She really has the Kazier bloodline flowing inside her veins. She's so bold.'
Fantasy · Elyon
I thought they would be but hearing it from her is good ok that one just finished fully. it is next on my list. I am keeping up with wizard world.
"So young, and he is forced to carry the burden of two worlds on his shoulders," James sighed. "His name is Lux, right? Also, another red-headed Half-Elf? The two of you really knew what you were doing when you came to find me. Fortunately, the timezone of that world is slower than this one…"
Fantasy · Elyon
let's go.. this is where this happens I was wondering if James was that guy.
The old man watched as the young witches of Brynhildr Academy walked away with excited looks on their faces.
Fantasy · Elyon
that or this is that world and they just don't know it... yet
"I will look forward to that future," Chiffon said feeling hopeful. "When that happens, I will let my daughters visit you again. So, make sure that you will make that future a reality."
Fantasy · Elyon
oh this is going to be good. guard as one of the Merc.. wonder how strong their head is up the Cain the Merc are
ch 277 Audience with the Council
Fantasy · Tasty_Dragon
not really, it seems in line with the enemy they were fighting against. hit and run: while dealing as much damage as possible.
ch 276 Anger x Conflict
Fantasy · Tasty_Dragon
let the battle begin also they might have just hit his (reverse scale) 🤔 good lead in
ch 275 Confrontation
Fantasy · Tasty_Dragon
Good start to the great hunt looking forward to seeing where this rolls off to now that Stella has met rune and has gone back is she going to study light and dark? or once he's healed she going to come find them again
ch 274 Tracking the Mercenaries
Fantasy · Tasty_Dragon
Good chapter, nice little twist with the krakens. let the hunt begin.
ch 273 The Inhabitants of Nereid 4
Fantasy · Tasty_Dragon
nice more city exploration and a foreshadow of what's to come 🙂😁
ch 272 The Inhabitants of Nereid 3
Fantasy · Tasty_Dragon
well this is a wonderful chapter on so many levels The last little bit made me laugh to know end his magic circuits evolving made me think that he's going to be stupidly strong once they fully form but overall looking forward to the next few chapters I'm going the non-privilege route so it's been great so far.
ch 532 There’s No Need For You To Thank Me
Fantasy · Elyon
oh boy let the prep begin. wonder who the other two are? I have a feeling that Chloe is one. idk about the other
ch 568 How About We All Make A Bet?
Strongest Warlock - Wizard World Irregular
Fantasy · Elyon