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The sage has it all. Impressive foreshadowing. Great outline. Perfect storyline. Loved it. Keep updating the novel more frequently, Ash. I look forward to it.

Noiceee...Its a good read. The entire system at once concept is great. Keep updating soo I can keep reading. The world building is also perfectly planned and executed.

Yes its pretty great

Its great just that the writing quality needs improvement. The character's thought are overflowing from his mouth. Its confusing to see whether the character is speaking or thinking.

Its great, but the writing quality is a bit poor. The plot of the novel is actually confusing and nonexistent. Add the harem tag too. It has multiple females till date. Look into it. I hope u improve.

Its a good read, just that you need a content editor. The text needs to be refined. But keep it up. I love system based novels. Write more and I'll support.