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World explodes - Millions or Billions die - both of the mcs don't really care or change because of that. What a great story. Oh, what the side characters who are from set world and literary lost everything in their early twenties do not seem to show any sort of long term effect (longer than one chapter) in personality. Wow amazing. My problem is not even that the author basically threw away around 300 chapter of setup and plot for one event that changes everything. I think it is a good idea to do something unpredictable. It's just that the character reaction to the situation is literary so outlandishly stupid that i can't read this anymore. Like there has to be some change in character or some dark thoughts about this situation, but in the story they just continue like nothing happened. Oh, yeah this new planet enslaves all humans and has some celestial spot, where we have to go, but Malaka you can't slack of with your training hahahaha, while qia and calina are just out here like, I just lost my parents and everyone I ever knew, but I love rean/roan and still have kentucky to cuddle so it doesn't matter. I wouldn't even be this upset if something changed like anything about the characters, but there is nothing and even the oh so compassionate rean, just sighs and moves on. No emotion in sight after spending 24 years of finally getting his emotions back from the system. Could be just as dead inside as death himself if he reacts like that. Anyway, with that being said, I have no hope of character development or any sort of payoff after everyone probably magically comes back to life, since apparently nobody cared to begin with.

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What an unimaginable scene. Thank you for giving the reader all the details to fully grasp the weight of the situation.

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Fantasy · Noguide

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As a loyal reader from day one I have to say that Im quite disapointed with this paragraph. I always had the imagination that this work harboured top tier spelling and grammar, but writing years as "yrs" or even "yr" is not acceptal for me and should not be for you either. And to top it of the author even forgot to put spaces in between his words. I really hope this will just stay a one time thing. Otherwise I will feel forced to drop this novel regardless of the magnificent story. If you read this dear author: I think you wrote this while ill so get well soon. If you dont get well fast enough, I will leave this novel behind with a one star rating. Greetings from a passionate day one reader.

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Fantasy · Noguide

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Intellect: 2 The game determined: You are stupid

The beginner stats ranged from 0 to 20 depending on each individual's prior condition.

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Fantasy · Yolohy

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Imagine an archievement: read the entire TOS. 0,1% complete rate

There were also no secret advantages or hidden prizes for people listening to the entire boring lecture, so he bluntly stopped the fairy.

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Fantasy · Yolohy

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Instead, in the pitch-black space, a small gift box appeared and Beethoven's Fur Elise started loudly playing.

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Fantasy · Yolohy

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Game sales plan: JUST BREAK EVERY EXISTING GAME AND MAKE EVERY VR CONSOLE COMPATIBLE. Genious!

Everything will magically disappear, to be replaced by the one and only game, 'Evolution Online' which could somehow be played with any gaming capsule irrespective of the gaming company that had made the capsule.

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