Male, 29, Music/Novel Lover, Gamer, Weeb, Nerd/Geek. Hopeless romantic, INTP.
2022-11-20 Joined United States
I'm not an experienced writer. I'm just testing the waters and hopefully I can get a story out. My grammar / punctuation is not the best. Sorry in advance. I wouldn't expect frequent updates. As I said I'm new to this. Have some idea about my story? Comment it and let me know I gladly welcome any advice or tips.
ch 0 1 Exhaling In Winter
Fantasy · Stygian_Styx
This hurt to read, truly sad
And with that, she slit her throat. But Risea didn't scream. She steeled her nerves and kept on an expressionless face as the guards took her to the prince's carriage and entered it with her.
Eastern · BlackFlamer
I can't stop picturing her as a pokemon now lol. I know it's not the same name but its to close. Amber / Ember woulda been better IMHO.
Author's note - I have changed Amber's name to Mariel, who is a goddess of fire. Thank you Sue_D_Nymn for suggesting this name.
Eastern · BlackFlamer
I honestly don't like all the memory wipes.
"I altered their memories so they saw that I sacrificed a treasure to summon an 8th stage heaven spirit realm beast. The traitors died instantly and I told everyone that I have many more treasures. They don't remember about you having a 1st stage heaven spirit realm cultivation or about them dying and being resurrected again or practically everything that happened." Kai explained.
Eastern · BlackFlamer
That's gonna be pretty Epic, can't wait, iirc I'm on like 50ish now.
ch 36 Overcoming Your Fears [Part 1]
Fantasy · Elyon
So far I'm liking this book alot. It's a bit different then Strongest System but still a good read. It helps that I have always loved necromancy and gods like Hades/Osiris. Truth be told if I ever played DnD I would go for a Archlich build.
ch 36 Overcoming Your Fears [Part 1]
Fantasy · Elyon
This is a great book.
I wish it had more.
Also, if you are a new reader, check my other novels, [Fourth Prince's Debauchery] and [Science/Magic]
Fantasy · Aidka
This is so William lol
After thinking for a few minutes, Lucien finally decided on green. For some reason, having red hair and green eyes reminded him of that handsome protagonist that he had read about in one of his favorite novels.
Fantasy · Elyon
William be like "I'm activating harem god Issei's piece to pass this flag and get both"
Oliver had watched William grow up and he could vouch for the boy's character. However, just like his Mistress, Celine, said, it was still too early to tell whether the red-headed boy was the one that would fulfill the Elven Prophecy.
Fantasy · Elyon
You can tell some of the people reading have never been in a pet/slave + owner relationship.
"It is the first gift I received from you, Master. Naturally, it is very precious to me," William answered.
Fantasy · Elyon
People are wild... im totally on board with this. tbh I would have kept it as well. Then again I honestly thought she was gonna be part of the Harem since like day 1.
"Leave it as it is, Master." William gave Celine a mischievous smile. "Didn't you tell me that this is your gift to me? Since it is a gift, you shouldn't take it back."
Fantasy · Elyon
I don't understand his or anyone else's hate twords her. She's never been anything other then a loving big sister type to him other then when she's helping with the training he wanted. She put a collar on him? big deal. there are plenty of guys/girls who like that sort of thing. even with the collar she didn't treat him as a slave or pet.
"I would be lying if I said no, Master," William replied honestly. "Although I feel some resentment towards you, I will not forget that you treated me well over the past few years. I am very grateful to have become your disciple."
Fantasy · Elyon
I feel that. As much as I would like to have faith in humanity it's growing ever harder in recent years.
The young girl laid on her back and looked up at the sky. The snow that was falling had become even heavier. She stared blankly up at the cloudy sky with her pitch-black eyes growing dull. A single snowflake fluttered down and landed on her nose. Her already purple lips slowly parted: "It seems humans are nothing but demons in disguise… If I am ever to be reborn, then I would rather be a fucking bug than a human."
Fantasy · invayne
This is heartbreaking, It brings to mind the girl from Grave of the fireflies starving to death.
The man took the bag out of the dumpster and put it in his cart before pushing it down the alley. He stopped in front of the young girl, snorted then kicked her in the leg. "Stay the fuck out of my area. Just go die in a ditch somewhere. Fucking bitch wasting my food."
Fantasy · invayne
I'm really enjoying this novel. Can't wait to see how he gets his harem to get along though. as it stands none know about the other girls.
So, I already have most of her heart on my grasp. I'm sure that with a bit more of work, Dina will agree to be with me, even if we are siblings.
Fantasy · Aidka
it's Styx#9999.or maybe Stygian Styx now. not sure how the new change to discord tags work.
ch 0 1 Symphony of Traits: A Soul's Tapestry
Stygian Poems
Fantasy · Stygian_Styx