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The story is quite captivating, and it got off to a good start in capturing the attention of the readers. I've read several chapters, and so far, I think the plot is good, and I'm excited to see what happens next. The storyline is well-structured, and it never failed to pique my curiosity about what would happen next.

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Aside from the novel's amazing plotline, what kept me reading all the way through was how beautifully the author described everything. Seriously, not only was it a good source of entertainment, but I also learned many wonderful ways to express myself, for which I must thank the author. I couldn't find any constructive criticism or mistakes because everything appeared to be perfect to me. So, good luck with your novel, author, and I hope you get as many potential readers as possible.

Ok, first of all, the characters are introduced in an amazing way, the story is very easy to understand, and it is written at an incredible level. Even though I've never read a romance story, this one really grabbed me past Chapter 4. The world is very good and explains very well what is happening. Very good work Author! Keep doing this amazing work.

Thank you very much for your support. I am excited to know that someone is reading what I write. Yes! You are right; I am currently helping myself with tools to improve my grammar when writing and reduce some complex paragraphs to simpler things. It has helped me a lot to practice English, and I hope to improve the quality of everything in the new chapters. I have left several interesting things in the prologue, but it is not the time to know them yet.