Bajungas
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TELLL USSS
tls123: You won't know it because it is an unknown competition.
Urban · 싱숑
Period instead if comma and too passive
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Make this sentence more active and less confusing
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Ok now you telling much and not enough showing
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Was coming can be changed to stronger verb
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Wake up, the darkness does not welcome you.
Arcanist Tales
Fantasy · XcrapttS