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ch 21 You just need to run?
Eastern · Peace_in_Chaos
Real story
Everything is good so far. I like the characters and writing style. Grammar is also good right now. Good luck on working hard. I think real start starts from the chapter 'Death'.
Scenes in this chapter are very awesome!
ch 0 5 A Tragic End
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
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ch 21 You just need to run?
Master Of The Universe
Eastern · Peace_in_Chaos