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he makes a good point, give us evidence of your god not just some book

So far ive reached ch 17 and its sort of an info dump of world building and character goals. Its not impossible to read since its still somewhat interesting, but author you should try to improve on your method of world building, its kind of clunky. Anyway good read so far. Ps. My stars are based off my read till chapter 17

Absolute garbage in the latest chapters, author aint even trying at this point, hes gone against basically every soul record rules without consequence and the mc became braindead with a max iq of 40

I quite liked this novel at first, but when it came to chapter 1400 or so onward everything became heaps repetitive and basically became some crappy chinese cultivation novel with constant face slapping and useless fights against weaklings every chapter. The void palace arc is probably the worst in this regard, which is where ive dropped the novel for the time being. Hopefully the author starts putting in more effort into improving. Also the constant nerfing and strenghtening of the mc is bloody annoying, since he makes 0 progress and keeps getting dumber and dumber. Apart from everything said in this rant its a decent novel, i just couldnt get past all the negatives.

Dont say youre not biased lol. As soon as an author comments and reviews their own novel its biased. Practically no one can seperate emotion from logic. Little rant

This is probably one of the best, or the best novel ive read on webnovel this far, and ive read a lot. It might start out slow but it increases in pace further along. The mc and fml are characters with quite a bit of depth and humour, with the mc being intelligent and cunning with logic to it, unlike most half assed novels out there. Even the side characters arent just used and left behind from the start. Anyway its good stuff Read it!

i'll show you the rise of my white dragon 🫢🫣😌

Does the grammar get any better? Im around chapter 20

its the same in chapters 1200 onwards, she eventually loses her memory temporarily, and it becomes more messy from there

Ive reached around chapter 350

I dont mind this novel, its alright. But its not my type since its got more slice of life than action, aswell as being quite childish. In my opinion the authors gone for quantity over quality. I prefer quality.

Worse than his other novels unfortunately. It seems rushed and not planned at all, since a lot of it is quite illogical and full of plot holes. Barely any world background. Stupid characters. Like how can a queen be so stupid, when she was most likely taught from birth. Aswell as overly gullible for falling for obvious lies. Character design is quite bare. Plot is slow and filled with 50% fillers. Writing quality is ok, could be better. Grammar and translation is meh, a lot of sentences are kinda back to front, kinda how yoda speaks.

ngl the health bars during fights ruin the action for me

All i see are 5 star reviews. I hate these crappy authors that create false advertistising to make up for their lack of skill.

true, but returnee is way better anyway

i stopped reading its just a money grabber at this point

7 chapters in and so far well written with what seems to be a great plot

arrogance leads to stupidity in my opinion meaning this mc probably aint fit to become strong

The whole, its a dream, at the start of the novel is kinda stupid no offense. Author you should maybe change that to something more realistic