Eleanor isn’t weak, she could’ve killed him then if she had the right equipment to. As for the “they”, that would be the subjects of the king that took over after he was taken care of. There was a reason his power was only sealed, but I won’t get into that as it’s essential to the plot and I’m avoiding spoilers. Just read more.
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When did any passage at all say the “gods” came to kill him? He is under the castle, obviously humans are the ones trying to come kill him. And why would trying to kill him involve breaking the chain?
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The chains holding him there weren’t anything special since he was already weakened. He only got a power boost after absorbing blood.
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Just keep reading lol
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That sounds logical but the next chapter will show you why that won’t work.
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Every quirk has limits, but imagining death is possible.
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Hard to read because I felt I had to remember too many things and my attention span couldn’t keep up. Work on your chapter and please, put a synopsis
Drool with envy? Really? Simply “filled with envy” would’ve sufficed
His teammates were similarly equipped, all in epic gear, a formidable lineup. Any player here would drool with envy. Even though "Eternity" had been running for years, most players still struggled for a piece of dark gold equipment; epic gear was nearly mythical!
Player NO.1
Fantasy · TheresaChavez
After saying “…Jason’s gear was all epic quality…” use a semi colon before describing his gear.
Jason's gear was all of epic quality, his light blue robe flowing with magical runes, his crystal blue staff shimmering, and his accessories glinting with a red hue — the unique glow of epic gear.
Player NO.1
Fantasy · TheresaChavez
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original Beltimus Online: The 49 Kill Challenge
After killing the final boss of the top RPG; Beltimus online, Mikel finds himself along with the other top fifty gamers on the game being transported into it after a series of events. The forty-nine other players are tasked with killing the undead monarch: the necromancer who holds the title of the final boss in order to be granted freedom. Whereas Mikel, who had accomplished this feat already, was meant to become the very villain he defeated. Unfortunately, due to Mikel's previous actions, he is unable to become the undead monarch and instead becomes a skeleton in his horde. Despite this, his mission remains the same; kill them all or get killed by them. Let the 49-kill challenge... begin! ______ Disclaimer: the cover art isn't mine, you know the drill :)22 Chs 100 Collections
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Marvel: Alpha Superhero System
Harry was an average person who lived a horrible life. He didn't have any family, friends, and his life could only be described as sad. Unable to bear it anymore, Harry decided to commit suicide, but just before he died, he received the Alpha Superhero System and was transmigrated to the Marvel universe! The system grants him the opportunity to get any ability or skill from any superhero he kills. With this new found power, Harry decides to live a new life. One of domination!30 Chs 1.1k Collections
Was intently reading from the beginning, but it began to seem like an info dump as I read more. There are grammar errors and the flow is off. I would suggest going back to the drawing board and then editing. For now, I’ll add to library and read later.
Celesta- City of Angels
Fantasy · jingla_xesis