Webnovel Author: Arnab_Panday - Fanfic Collection

In my opinion, it a very good fanfic. First of all, your writing quality is very good. I don't have any problem understanding the story. I haven't found any big mistakes. There are some like, you something write 'she' where it should be 'he' or the opposite. But it isn't that confusing. I give you a 10/10 in this. Second is your update stability. It's hasn't even been 1 day since you posted this fanfic so I can't say much about it. But I will give you 10/10 for posting so many at once. Third, your story development is good enough. You definitely know what you are doing. It's just, ah I would have liked to more lovers. Like the two beast girls. And well, if possible the Isekai girl too. So for my personal satisfaction 8/10. Forth, hmm I can't say anything about it. I mean, I didn't find any oc expect the protagonist. Still only for MC you still get 10/10. Lastly fifth, your world background is confusing as I haven't noticed much change from the cannon. I know what consequence that will happen because of simply MC existing. As he is a native to this world he is not free from the course but is resistance to it. The dragon god will know about him and that will be a huge shift in cannon. I am still waiting for more chapters. So, yeah 10/10. I will answer some obvious questions. It's a harem fanfic. No, it doesn't have any NTR moments. Mc will not be op at the beginning and will not be the strongest any time soon. It isn't a dark story. MC dense for some chapters but don't worry he won't be like those stupidity dense protagonist. He will understand everything in due time.