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CarltheCreator
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The m in Mr should be capitalized.
The news reporter started to describe him, stating different body features as the final nail in the coffin was her saying to the camera "The man has further identified to be Mr Damien Barrow".
The Night Lawyer
Urban · RA_PHA_EL
Change Apprehension to apprehension.
Fear, confusion, anger, denial all slammed into Damien's chest like a sledgehammer. He got up and flung open his door to see a police car stopping outside his house as two officers stepped down. Noticing him their eyes were saddled with apprehension and sorrow as they could only stare at him in silence.
The Night Lawyer
Urban · RA_PHA_EL
as he
At the last moment when he was right in the world middle of the road, he noticed an oncoming car moving way too fast for him to leap away. His last thoughts were him not being able to have a battle of wits in the courtroom with his son or be there as he became a man. He muttered "Goodbye son" as his final words.
The Night Lawyer
Urban · RA_PHA_EL
Where did you even hear of "koenigsegg".I didn't even know that brand existed.
His dad constantly nagged him for it telling him he had the potential to reach for the stars but would settle for stairs. He was like a "Koenigsegg" that settled at a scooter's speed.
The Night Lawyer
Urban · RA_PHA_EL
Sadly, those concepts don't bind this mc.
What do you mean?
In a good or bad way?
ch 48 CHAPTER 47: Instructor Romguy
Primordial's Champions
Fantasy · CarltheCreator
Like I said, it's different from other webnovels.
ch 48 CHAPTER 47: Instructor Romguy
Primordial's Champions
Fantasy · CarltheCreator
What you think of the chapter?
ch 46 CHAPTER 46: Sinking
Primordial's Champions
Fantasy · CarltheCreator
By the way, are you a member of my discord channel?
ch 44 CHAPTER 44: Getting Off My Ass
Primordial's Champions
Fantasy · CarltheCreator
Do you think I should change the synopsis?
ch 42 CHAPTER 42: The Mystical Forest
Primordial's Champions
Fantasy · CarltheCreator
What do you like about it?
ch 41 CHAPTER 41: Fragmented Mind
Primordial's Champions
Fantasy · CarltheCreator
Dad's will
The Night Lawyer
Urban · RA_PHA_EL