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Onyx71733

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2022-11-26 Joined Global

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There is something wrong with her

I'll just make him paint something every time he seems in the right mood, and then I'll sell the paintings and make money. Oh, I'll give him part of the sum and consider it a contract.

Crazy Duke and Fallen Queen

Crazy Duke and Fallen Queen

History · xiaohai_23

Onyx71733
Onyx71733
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What more is needed at this point GIRL

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But understanding Alexander has been so hard before, indeed. Should I really give it a try?

Crazy Duke and Fallen Queen

Crazy Duke and Fallen Queen

History · xiaohai_23

Onyx71733
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She’s dumb

Alexander just hugged me, worrying. I didn't tell him about my dreams: it would have been odd to explain.

Crazy Duke and Fallen Queen

Crazy Duke and Fallen Queen

History · xiaohai_23

Onyx71733
Onyx71733
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Did he poison her?

«This night, we greet Ambassador Zolokis. He's been a good friend for our city, ensuring transparent communication with Asteria and good advice for a young ruler like this Queen.»

Crazy Duke and Fallen Queen

Crazy Duke and Fallen Queen

History · xiaohai_23

Onyx71733
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It’s weird she doesn’t know his age after all this time

How long ago was that? More than ten years, but less than twenty. It's hard to understand how old my Duke is. His face is young but mature, and his actions are sometimes childish. However, he always has the aura of an elder or a general. He's so wise, even if young.

Crazy Duke and Fallen Queen

Crazy Duke and Fallen Queen

History · xiaohai_23

Onyx71733
Onyx71733
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Its really difficult to determine who is talking what time they are in and what’s past or present of the story it feels very disorganized

"How do you fear something you don't know?" the girl said and let a shadow come at her. Aria bit back a scream and pushed herself back from her as fast as she could.  "Please stop," she begged as she felt something hit her back but she was focused on the shadows that were quick to come her way.

Loving The Forbidden

Loving The Forbidden

Fantasy · Serial_seresposa

Onyx71733
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Dang all this because he wanted to cheat😡

He remembered the look on his family's face. The one of disappointment and anger. Sorrow and hatred. He remembered his own, even one that was ghostly and zombie-like. He had messed up and nothing could make it better. He had cared about her, he had loved her but he had still done her wrong just for a second of lust.

Loving The Forbidden

Loving The Forbidden

Fantasy · Serial_seresposa

Onyx71733
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This is immature she could have explained what she felt he did wrong 😑

I am not just going to switch sides and take it in. Learn to see where you are wrong Silver and stop being an ass." She snapped as she pulled her wrist away from his hand. "Lets go," she said to Peila and they immediately headed outside. 

Loving The Forbidden

Loving The Forbidden

Fantasy · Serial_seresposa

Onyx71733
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She is dramatic he didn’t say anything wrong and he wasn’t really rude

Their faces filled with confusion as they clearly wondered why she wasn't on her way with Silver. "Your damn brother might be someone I would have to marry but let's all get this damn straight, I am not one of your normal females that will just take this nonsense and be spoken to rudely. If he wants to be rude, he can go marry that bloody witch and have me returned home immediately." She spat and pushed past them both.

Loving The Forbidden

Loving The Forbidden

Fantasy · Serial_seresposa

Onyx71733
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I think her mentors or whatever r not understand her as much as they claim

Take time to learn and don't be so quick to fight and chase after the King with your anger, he knows your pain from a different perspective. I know a human saying, don't judge one until you put yourself in their shoes. Come now, we must get you bathed as later I will be teaching you how to dine with the different beings.' Quin said mentally with a small smile on her face.

Loving The Forbidden

Loving The Forbidden

Fantasy · Serial_seresposa

Onyx71733
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For a women involved in very toxic previous relationships she should be more understanding

Eliana watched her daughter with a shocked and hurt expression. Her daughter had never said anything so hurtful and domineering ever. She always spoke to her with respect and decency yet now she spoke to her as if she had left her stranded one day and never cared to give her attention again.

Loving The Forbidden

Loving The Forbidden

Fantasy · Serial_seresposa

Onyx71733
Replied to Sarah_Rose_7119

Yeah the author even wrote that Lucian couldn’t burn the demons with his fire because they were demons it’s and inconsistency on the authors part

Nyx could understand her mother's intentions yet she couldn't help but hate her. She knew very well that if witches caught demons they didn't just kill them, they tortured them until they admitted that they were sinful creatures. Then they burned them. Demons cannot die by getting burned therefore they would burn until the witches decided to kill them.

Married to the Devil's Son

Married to the Devil's Son

Fantasy · JasmineJosef

Onyx71733
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How long is she to remain useless

While pondering on many things I went to the garden right behind the room and decided to spend some time there while waiting for Lucian. I was surprised when I found a swing just right next to a big tree. It reminded me of the white swing in our own garden except this one was a bit smaller and it was grey instead of white. I lay down on it and began to swing back and forth while recalling good memories and smiling to myself.

Married to the Devil's Son

Married to the Devil's Son

Fantasy · JasmineJosef

Onyx71733
Commented

Is this why she doesn’t try she always thinks she is going to have a safety net

I really must be desperate to kiss another man, to even let myself believe that he was my husband. Embarrassed I ran out of the room. I knew I would be in big trouble later but right now I didn't care. I went to the storeroom where I sleep at night and just cried and cried while hoping for Lothaire to appear out of nowhere. All I wanted right now was to leave this place.

Married to the Devil's Son

Married to the Devil's Son

Fantasy · JasmineJosef

Onyx71733
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She is really not smart why not poison him little by little

"Thankfully, he is absorbed with himself today. Apparently his future wife is coming." I whispered to her then went to grab a pot to make some tea.

Married to the Devil's Son

Married to the Devil's Son

Fantasy · JasmineJosef

Onyx71733
Commented

I don’t know it’s easy to hate her character

"Of course, Your highness. I will prepare one immediately." I said annoyed that he couldn't even wait a moment before he could begin to order me around. I didn't even get a chance to change from the beautiful dress I was wearing.

Married to the Devil's Son

Married to the Devil's Son

Fantasy · JasmineJosef

Onyx71733
Commented

Die it would be the biggest sacrifice

I lay curled on the cold ground, hungry and scared. Pierre had only told me about the rats in the dungeon, but here I was, surrounded by cockroaches and spiders as well. I didn't know how many days I spent in this dark place where I could barely know if it was day or night. I so longed to get out of here, to see the light again and breath in the scent of fresh air. To be able to walk under the sun and feel the taste of delicious food, but all that would come with a price. Pierre would not let me out of this place until I agreed to become his and I felt like I was getting sick staying here. Not only physically but mentally as well.

Married to the Devil's Son

Married to the Devil's Son

Fantasy · JasmineJosef

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