Brazillian with english as a second language, amateur writer
2022-11-30 Joined Brazil
I do like that you have character portraits for the main cast, it actually helps a lot in visualizing them, but having a more detailed explanation of what the characters are thinking and feeling would help a lot to visualize what's going on around them, I hope to see this reaching it's potential.
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Good dialogue and sci-fi ? Sign me the fuck up, always a sucker for an futuristic setting in stories, shame that it's so short right now, can't wait for it to reach it's potencial.
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A historical story that actually manages to capture my attention, now that's a rare combination, crossing my fingers here that it stays consistent !
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I'll say that some solid yuri you got going on, I'm actually interested to see where this goes, shame that it has just started, I kind of wanted to binge it.
SamiYuri: Flowers of Our Garden
Fantasy · Yukina_Miu