JLCruickshank

JLCruickshank

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Ontario, Canada

2022-11-30 Joined Canada
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11 months ago
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Hey! It's been a while. I launched a new project called Rebirth of the Golden Heiress. I hope that you give it a look :) I look forward to any comments!

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1 years ago
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Whew...Out of the hospital, I had a bad recurrence of a hospital infection I picked up during my last tumor resection operations and stay. I have a compromised immune system, AI and HS so infections nuke me. I am allergic to most of the antibiotics, so it was weeks of vancomycin IVs and care of the wound left behind. I started work on book two and will be putting up my second series soon. Thanks for your support Elizabeth.

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1 years ago
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Hey thanks for your feedback.I am happy to clear things up and receptive to changes. This paragraph describes Liem giving Nora; a non-romantic and genuine comforting hug because something seems to be upsetting her from the characters point of view and he's clueless to the deeper psychological under currents. Due to the confrontation of his own actual feelings for Nora earlier in the chapter I wanted to differentiate the hugs intention to a non-romantic one. So I can leave it as is with the explanation, or I can rewrite the paragraph to change it to a "soothing hug." instead? I look forward to your feedback and I am happy you're enjoying the work so far :)

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1 years ago
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I'll get to work soon. I'm on a temporary medical hiatus and will be back soon :)

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1 years ago
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this is a great question; Solar Particle Events cause the degradation of natural fibres and electronics to malfunction when hit in space. I envisioned the sun exploding due to multiple SPES. I imagine the t-shirt broke down, and that would leave a nice fluidless zippo lighter in the deep Izaberne frost.

"Her belongings have been incinerated, and the translation program created to communicate with her has already been purged as it was on the HudaiTech system." Kai said,

Quills: the Rise of the Northern Matriarch

Quills: the Rise of the Northern Matriarch

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1 years ago
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No doubt, they are so comfy and can decorate them! Skechers and New Balance are some of my nurse friends favorites.

"I am sure I will. There are a lot of steps to go through. Knowing you, it must be something huge," Solina said as she took her boots off. Many of them are barefoot now. Solina was given a pair of rubber shoes. They were horrendous looking but very comfortable. They passed through the decontamination chamber and into the clean room. Solina took a look at the rack in the middle of the room with great interest. Janel cleared his throat nervously. 

Quills: the Rise of the Northern Matriarch

Quills: the Rise of the Northern Matriarch

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1 years ago
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thank you for the notes Elizabeth. Sorry it took me long to update them. I'm under the weather ☁️🌡️

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1 years ago
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it helps me get contracted

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1 years ago
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I took a look over it and decided to do some rewording, thank you for your notes <3

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1 years ago
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Change of Allegiance was supposed to cover their need for the move, it has been updated with the missing text to explain why they moved. The information to update that is: Ivy and Fiona were discovered as identical twins (which is impossible due to the genetic syndrome). Allurai works as a Matriarch Prime of Callor and could not ever be trusted to know, the government would disappear her somewhere if they were advised which. Janel and Liem set to altering a deleting all the records, Janel quits Allari and signs a lifetime contract with Clan Quill. They are set to move to the new compound two days later anyways. It sets up Liem's worsening mental state and degradation of the relationship.

"I should go, but think about what I said," Cerez said as he patted Talan on the back. Liem pecked Nora on the forehead before he turned to Talan, who would be staying there with Nora for the meantime while they took care of things at home. Considering the circumstances, he was glad that the facilities were finally up and running. It was nice to be able to cook for themselves, but he had the feeling that they would start to use the food service team that fed everyone else in the facility a lot more now. They had guests at the moment, and it was time for the children to eat again. 

Quills: the Rise of the Northern Matriarch

Quills: the Rise of the Northern Matriarch

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  • Return of the Lost Golden Seer original

    Return of the Lost Golden Seer

    Urban ROMANCE SYSTEM R18 WEAKTOSTRONG SUPERPOWERS PARANORMAL KIDNAP SUPERPOWER TIMETRAVEL SUPERRICH

    Completed

    Selena, an elderly struggling worker at the Rhine Fulfillment Center, accepted an assignment in the most dangerous part of the underground Hubs: the Loop. Selena is given a rare second chance at life when what she believes is an industrial accident in the Loop sends her back in time to the year 2003, miraculously, instead of killing her like it did the others, and into her own younger self. Armed with her AI and newfound determination, Selena finds herself in Midtown, where she grew up in a troubled home. The house is cold, falling apart, and could use several repairs that the family could never afford. But compared to the Hubs and her awful past life, the place is a palace in comparison. Armed with an appreciation and gratitude for things as simple as having a varied diet Selena lives her life to the fullest. Selena makes life-altering improvements to her own life, and those around her start to follow suit. Her mother, Molly, a talented but troubled exotic dancer, struggles with addiction. Chooses to pursue sobriety and the demons of her past. While Molly's boyfriend, and Selena's father figure, a war veteran with a prosthetic leg, chooses to confront his alcoholism and PTSD alongside Molly, and support Selena in her dreams and business ventures. Selena is bullied at school again, just as she was in her past life. This time it is for an entirely different reason. But she rises above the torment, challenges, and hazing by using her unique abilities and decades of maturity and leaving her tormentors obsessed. Until one day, after investing in the bank, one of her high school bullies, Gunn Whitehaven, makes a startling discovery about Selena after she has a seizure, leaving his family's bank after he tried apologizing to her. A discovery that turns Selena's life upside down and into a world of power in which she has to dodge threats to her life and those that she loves. As Selena navigates this familiar yet strange world, she sets out to rewrite her past and create a brighter future for herself and those she loves. But as she rises from rags to riches, achieving fame and success, she uncovers long-hidden secrets that reveal the truth behind her family's downfall and deaths. With her newfound knowledge, strength, and AI, Selena must confront the demons of her past and forge a new path forward. Will she be able to protect those she loves from death and global catastrophe? **Adult Content, R18, Inclusive Universe.**

    112 Chs 19 Collections

  • Quills: the Rise of the Northern Matriarch original

    Quills: the Rise of the Northern Matriarch

    Sci-fi R18 WEAKTOSTRONG SURVIVAL GENIUS POSSESSIVE STRONGFL FUTURE PREGNANCY FAKEIDENTITY REVERSE HAREM

    Nora is transported to another version of Earth populated mostly by men. A world where women ruled with absolute and unmerciful power. Nora must protect herself, her identity and the group of men that she is forced to love. Will she be able to maintain her cover identity and make a life for herself that she can ethically tolerate? **Adult Content, 18+, and in an INCLUSIVE universe.**

    131 Chs 159 Collections