Whew...Out of the hospital, I had a bad recurrence of a hospital infection I picked up during my last tumor resection operations and stay. I have a compromised immune system, AI and HS so infections nuke me. I am allergic to most of the antibiotics, so it was weeks of vancomycin IVs and care of the wound left behind. I started work on book two and will be putting up my second series soon. Thanks for your support Elizabeth.
Hey thanks for your feedback.I am happy to clear things up and receptive to changes. This paragraph describes Liem giving Nora; a non-romantic and genuine comforting hug because something seems to be upsetting her from the characters point of view and he's clueless to the deeper psychological under currents. Due to the confrontation of his own actual feelings for Nora earlier in the chapter I wanted to differentiate the hugs intention to a non-romantic one. So I can leave it as is with the explanation, or I can rewrite the paragraph to change it to a "soothing hug." instead? I look forward to your feedback and I am happy you're enjoying the work so far :)
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I'll get to work soon. I'm on a temporary medical hiatus and will be back soon :)
this is a great question; Solar Particle Events cause the degradation of natural fibres and electronics to malfunction when hit in space. I envisioned the sun exploding due to multiple SPES. I imagine the t-shirt broke down, and that would leave a nice fluidless zippo lighter in the deep Izaberne frost.
"Her belongings have been incinerated, and the translation program created to communicate with her has already been purged as it was on the HudaiTech system." Kai said,
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No doubt, they are so comfy and can decorate them! Skechers and New Balance are some of my nurse friends favorites.
"I am sure I will. There are a lot of steps to go through. Knowing you, it must be something huge," Solina said as she took her boots off. Many of them are barefoot now. Solina was given a pair of rubber shoes. They were horrendous looking but very comfortable. They passed through the decontamination chamber and into the clean room. Solina took a look at the rack in the middle of the room with great interest. Janel cleared his throat nervously.
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thank you for the notes Elizabeth. Sorry it took me long to update them. I'm under the weather ☁️🌡️
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it helps me get contracted
I took a look over it and decided to do some rewording, thank you for your notes <3
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Change of Allegiance was supposed to cover their need for the move, it has been updated with the missing text to explain why they moved. The information to update that is: Ivy and Fiona were discovered as identical twins (which is impossible due to the genetic syndrome). Allurai works as a Matriarch Prime of Callor and could not ever be trusted to know, the government would disappear her somewhere if they were advised which. Janel and Liem set to altering a deleting all the records, Janel quits Allari and signs a lifetime contract with Clan Quill. They are set to move to the new compound two days later anyways. It sets up Liem's worsening mental state and degradation of the relationship.
"I should go, but think about what I said," Cerez said as he patted Talan on the back. Liem pecked Nora on the forehead before he turned to Talan, who would be staying there with Nora for the meantime while they took care of things at home. Considering the circumstances, he was glad that the facilities were finally up and running. It was nice to be able to cook for themselves, but he had the feeling that they would start to use the food service team that fed everyone else in the facility a lot more now. They had guests at the moment, and it was time for the children to eat again.
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Hey! It's been a while. I launched a new project called Rebirth of the Golden Heiress. I hope that you give it a look :) I look forward to any comments!
Quills: the Rise of the Northern Matriarch
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