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I love the book but after he died the first time I was a little lost I would rather he been in a coma but even though I was confused I did understand eventually and you made it work in the long run next time don't rush the ending though as much as I love how you made him have a moment with a old friend it seemed rushed

In all honesty you did do a good job especially at the start I could see U had a good vision for the book and got a little conflicted about harem in the book because in the start I thought it would just be 18 but later on I was unsure by U suddenly dropping 2 people he slept with even though you made your character reflect I feel it was more of how people were reacting to your choice. But in all you did good your book was interesting since you gave a usually background character a buff but idk the after berus came it seems stress and pulled out a little

honestly I love the book got to love and giving someone like tenten a spotlight unlike most people who just has her as a background character gave me a type of enjoyment. Author-san you did a great job would love to see more stuff you write and if you continue the book by a long run