Marcus_Marcus_Lpt

1yr

Commented

The passage was not completely displayed on the screen. it was cut out .

After making sure that everything was not an illusion, Li Xiaonian laughed happily, and tears streamed down his face uncontrollably, which were tears of excitement.

Starting With A Space Battleship

Games · Silence Doesn't Mean Low-Key

Marcus_Marcus_Lpt

1yr

Commented

Please be watchful of some typographic errors

"Hello, how many I help you?"

Alternate World: I Started With Two SSS Templates

Urban · Cold Fried Anchovies

Marcus_Marcus_Lpt

1yr

Posted

I love the concept of the story but what inferiorates me is the hiding of OP skills for too much. It's a taboo already and a cliche!

Global Symbiotes: My Symbiote Is A Slime

Fantasy · Blue Soft Dough

Marcus_Marcus_Lpt

1yr

Commented

am so done with hiding strength.

If his strength was exposed too early, it might cause some trouble.

Global Symbiotes: My Symbiote Is A Slime

Fantasy · Blue Soft Dough

Marcus_Marcus_Lpt

1yr

Commented

there should be devour in the sequence. my Ghaaaawwwd!

[Sequence]: Perception, Split, Regeneration

Global Symbiotes: My Symbiote Is A Slime

Fantasy · Blue Soft Dough

Marcus_Marcus_Lpt

1yr

Commented

On the previous chapter the body size is already 15% and now it's back again to 9%. Please correct this and pay more attention to details.

[Body Size]: 9%

Global Symbiotes: My Symbiote Is A Slime

Fantasy · Blue Soft Dough

Marcus_Marcus_Lpt

1yr

Posted

I love the characters and how the plot is hitting the climax but there's something that's missing with the plot.

Forced

LGBT+ · imagineuphoria

Marcus_Marcus_Lpt

1yr

Posted

Amazing plot and I so like the MC . Hope to read more of this ❤️

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

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