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Hey there! So, at the time of my posting I have read up to chapter 10 and what I can say is that the story is progressing really well! The events aren't rushed, and they are given their own space in the story by giving suspense on certain things and other characters POV. The world background is so far pretty complex, this fanfic has some AU where many things have been changed in one way or another. 1mth 3 replies DragonCountry Badge DragonCountry Thank you for the review! img 1mth beau_gamer Badge beau_gamer Looks good 1mth God_of_hentai Badge God_of_hentai is there going to be any romance? DragonCountry: Thank you for the review! VIEW IMAGE 1mth Add a reply

There are stories with op mcs and there are stories that go too far into the opposite direction. It's clear at times how the author tries to portray a desperate situation even if it doesn't make any sense. Biggest gripe about this story is the inconsistent characterization of the Mc, one day the author portrays him as a young adult fully aware of consequences, objectivity and long term planning. Next time he writes him as a 6 year old kid. Why not ask his peers or teachers to review the curriculum? Why is he even training if he knows genin are child soldiers? Would being bullied by kids really bother a 20 year old transmigrator? If that's what the author intended he should've the Mc should have been at least aware of the discrepancy. 1mth VIEW 19 REPLIES maxphantom Badge maxphantom just stop man. this is insufferable. mc is pathetic beta and idiot. Mf got into coma at the thought of not being able to use chakara. Didn’t he watched the fillers. The method to become op in Narutos World is unlimited. 1mth VIEW 10 REPLIES asaade Badge asaade please don't rate it because of his old work, this story is full of angst and depression if that is to your liking feel free to read it 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1mth VIEW 23 REPLIES maxphantom Badge maxphantom overrated garbage. nothing else. mc is beta trash and pathetic. i mean i have read tons of trash fanfic before but even in them mc wasn’t this much pathetic. So sorry man. I tried my best to see any hidden buildup or anything that you might be building in the fic. But all I found was garbage. 1mth VIEW 5 REPLIES Daoistzto7Ni Daoistzto7Ni this is trash 1mth VIEW 6 REPLIES Kobyfate Badge Kobyfate Woah-woah-woah, it is naruto fic from FictionOnlyReader, I really believe that it will be a great story. Good luck author.⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ img 1mth VIEW 17 REPLIES leo26 Badge leo26 It's pretty boring so far, Feels like a nothing burger, I get having a slow buildup and all but this just doesn't feel like a satisfying read to me. All you get is a desperate mc and all you feel is pity for him and that's all, The writing quality is good but the progression is not and that's all I have to say. Will update the review depending on whether the novels gets good or bad.(Some people might complain that it's too early to judge the novel in just the first 12 chapters but I think it's fair, people are even giving the fic 5 star just on the basis of his previous novels, so I think it's fair) 1mth VIEW 3 REPLIES asvoleort Badge asvoleort Man this is just borderline terrible 1mth uchiha_minato67 Badge uchiha_minato67 This is by far the worst naruto fanfic to ever exit 1mth Jinwoox69 Badge Jinwoox69 This is trash. nothing else 1mth Mugetsu_353 Badge Mugetsu_353 I had really high hopes for this story, but I'm sorry I'm not enjoying the story at all, the Mc is over dramatic for my tastes and gives a very annoying interaction between other characters. Good work writing stories is hard. Cheers I'm out. 1mth VIEW 2 REPLIES jinwooo90 Badge jinwooo90 Too much suspense. Too slow speed. Mc is pathetic. 1mth VIEW 2 REPLIES Skorzeur Badge Skorzeur I know the problem here... The author was traumatized by his Kuroko story where he made the MC too OP and now he is doing the same mistake in reverse, the MC is now too Weak and pathetic. img 1mth VIEW 3 REPLIES Daoistg0YOTr Daoistg0YOTr ........................................................................................................................................................... 1mth DaoistpHVVPI DaoistpHVVPI i really enjoyed your previous work. but this is very boring. seems like the mc is regressing. the mc really has nothing that makes me want to like them so far. with quin i loved instantly. this mc is just pitiful. i'm going to let this build up for a bit. i shall come back in a month hopefully something might happen that makes me want to continue reading. if i could stick through the sin vault arc. i can make it through this. best wishes 1mth DaoistmL1d1l Badge DaoistmL1d1l this is one of those fanfic where author tortures mc for fun. this is bs. after reading all 17 chapter it feels like a massive waste of time 1mth VIEW 1 REPLIES Kimjonun Badge Kimjonun this is just borderline terrible 1mth asuna56 asuna56 , 1mth VIEW 2 REPLIES Nnamdi_Nsofor Badge Nnamdi_Nsofor I'm finally ready to review this, I think most positive reviews are cuz of the previous work of the author but the mc is having too much discrepancy, I get the author wants to portray the feeling of the mc but wanting to cry cuz he missed targets, that just seems awkward, I'll just say I'm not feeling the story, I get the author doesn't want to do the op mc stuff, doing the opposite is ok but this is going to far especially with the unnecessary angst 1mth Mirio_kun Badge Mirio_kun If you are massecist, likes angst, seeing how phatic the mc is it's for you. It's a waste of time also ruining any good mood. The hope that things will change has been crushed after reading till 17 chapter and still mc being a weakling in world will no hope. 1mth DaoistvS8dwE DaoistvS8dwE This is trash. . ......................... img 1mth Issei_Subaru Issei_Subaru trash . ................................. img 1mth Suzuki_Ibara Suzuki_Ibara Waste of my time . . . . . . . . . . . . . 1mth ShyGuy1 Badge ShyGuy1 I had higher expectation but it seems like your lost in what to do here 1mth Akira_towya Akira_towya trash story . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 1mth sikuna sikuna . 1mth Daoistya2eZK Daoistya2eZK trash ................................... 1mth UnRandom_69 Badge UnRandom_69 Looking at the other ratings you can know what readers don't like, but looking at it from a different perspective... Most of them are right. Starting with how the story develops this is too slow, in this case the development does not apply because nothing is being developed, only the MC trying to adapt, literally taking almost everything to be able to go into every detail. With all this makes the story become very boring, only if you read it in its entirety and try to ignore this you could enjoy it. Talking about the quality of fanfic with respect to spelling and grammar is decent. Another thing to say would be that they should not base their ratings on the author's previous stories, believe me, I met too many people even authors who just because they have a decent work start saying they are the best. Well, I'm sorry that I deviate a lot from the main topic. If you have any complaints with my rating we could talk about it in the comments. img 1mth DaoistKj5hgA DaoistKj5hgA what did i just read🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮 img 1mth VIEW 3 REPLIES limphow limphow In the name of all the saints, what a nightmare.... At this rate, the Main character will become at least a little stronger by the time the main cast of characters leaves the academy, or by chapter 50. Or we won't see it and the author will drop it.... 1mth VIEW 1 REPLIES

It is well written with major plot holes, or at least I have noticed them. It isn't worth a try, at least. Keep up the good work, Author!

Hey there! So, at the time of my posting I have read up to chapter 10 and what I can say is that the story is progressing really well! The events aren't rushed, and they are given their own space in the story by giving suspense on certain things and other characters POV. The world background is so far pretty complex, this fanfic has some AU where many things have been changed in one way or another.

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