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I felt it to be alright development but it has left me somewhat befuddled. It the terms of the where the relation is to be brought to in the future. If we didn’t have a confirmation about the love interests it would be better for the story in its entirety but the character images auxiliary chapter has not been updated so I am personally left confused. I do understand not all interactions between males and females are to be brought to sexual relations (or attempts at it) but the rareaty is quite high even more so in FFs. But quality of your writing is fantastic and has left me flabbergasted as you are handling so many stories Good job.

No worries just keep up the good work because dam so far this is some quality content, especially on something like the atla series which doesn’t get as much love on these platforms.

I can just imagine MC Peter just hugging Gwen tight ands saying Mine.

I also apologize for using your comment for this discussion I hope you are at least getting a kick out of it or have some new knowledge out of it.

Whoa 🤯 I didn’t know about that natural occurrences couldn’t be absorbed and such. That changes a good amount of things in my mind and I didn’t know the fruit was like that in itself (you are the light itself part) I wonder if he would be able to use his elemental chakra in that state, because technically he would be almost pure Yang energy or would it be a new element at that point. My brain just did a retart when I tried to adamant seal chain (seal in the name) that at what point would something react if mc is fast enough nothing happens but what happens when touched would his partials just explode or would he just revert to normal form or does the target need to be trapped for that effect to happen. My only thing about kirin is that it is natural occurring but sasuke is manipulating the lighting guiding it to its target is it like chakra strings or pure elemental manipulation (if so that is insane)with no chakra input in an out of body state. When I was writing this last part I started to think what is lightning it is plasma which equals light what is the balancing act being played here is it just mass yang manipulation or is it blood line limit level combining elements or is it Nara Clan level and what that Bull entails. Which brings me personally back to the dam fruit. I did a loop of understanding and I am at what Is Light 💡 😂

The possibility/Imagination of FF it is what I love about them. The ability to take something from here and there and make something enjoyable is a awesome skill. I guess from what you are saying it would also depend on what is powering this ability. (Not sure if this was explained earlier in the story but what is powering the fruits ability) I am wondering about this because the author said in a not so long ago chapter that he is confident of having a yang affinity, chakra is the combination of spiritual and Physical energy’s yang ability’s are just more powered by the Yang energy then what would by yin (never mind elemental energy’s). My question now would be is the ability being run off of chakra itself or is it some separate thing, that is affecting the MC’s affinity’s (this is all speculation) and if it is being run off of chakra then the absorption path (reneggan) would just be able to almost delete thoughs techniques almost like Dxd’s protagonist dress break (solution sage mode of corse) or another way is tinketsu points and the gentle fist way of fighting the disruption or distruction of them could make a hole in the armor if not careful (of course this is speculating that it has penetration power to go passed the armor in the first place or sneak attack. (This is just rambling at this point and you don’t have to answer or speculate with me if you don’t want to. Thank you for the discussion in anycase)

First I want to thank you for the civil discussion, “I usually see the No U are wrong” and such child speak. And thank you for responding back. I completely forgot about sealing (mainly because it is not thoroughly explained or as simplified as the main 3 techniques and only really see it in FFs) I love the theory of Seals and such in the Naruto world it technically plays such a vital role but is a mistery. Apologies for asking another question but it is about the light/Yang ability the MC has. From what it is being described as it is reminding me of the Uchiha Clan’s Susanoo and the Uzumaki’s Chakra Chains (yes I know about it not being a blood line limit but an ability (As head cannon is a blood line to me🤫)) are we in store for something similar or is it going to go left instead of right in my way of thinking. (This is of course the author following the ability according to the One Piece cannon and such it is a FF)

While I agree with you on pretty much all of it, I still have a slight doubt that he will be able to sence someone that is probably specialized in stealth for said purpose of getting around sensors at least checking in on him as he is a rising star that danzo has his eye on along with the super pervert the resident spy master. (Or is my understanding Observation Haki not complete or is it a plot thing (the or is a random thought I had) (don’t hate or anything but I have not watched One Piece which is why I am ask about it)

Even though I find these struggles amusing for our MC, I would have thought him a bit smarter then barging into a even though Freindly Familia (In my mind faction) area of residence, especially since the person he is bothering is pretty much the Second to highest position in said faction and as far as I know Stronger then him by a great amount. (Correct me if I am wrong on strength and Higharchy(butchered that spelling)) (That being said I am wondering how you will play the interactions of Hephaestus and Loki to our MC; Loki adoring Ais and all, and Hephaestus and “FF” usual harem route, not saying I don’t like the pairing or how it is usually played I love it just not sure how to express this part properly. I do wonder what twist you will put if you are going to include Hephaestus in the Harem. (or Tushubaki(again butchered that) I definitely didn’t forget about you even though you are the focuse right now 😅) I love what you are doing with this story and that you continue building what you want in this tale you are spinning here for us, I just wish I had more stones to give, I wish wellness for you and yours bye 👋.

And now we wait.

Side note, now I am now just left wondering about the parents of the 2 (mikoto and tsuna) think of this friendship, along with thinking of how you are going to be introducing our hyperactive red head and how they will all mesh together. The only other thing I am wondering about is maturity level of kids in the shinobi world it is always wonky from the actual series to the FF to how they will develop over the academy because it is a military institution as far as I recall but it doesn’t seam to prepare them enough in the series imo (going from a pragmatic point of view minds are very moldable as can be seen from the thirds speech “will of fire” at the beginning of the academy for our mc)

Wholesome Chapter that fits in really well.

Maybe take it up one notch but so far great pace with quality writing along with writing style and such. My advice do what you think is best for the story it is your time we are here for the ride you are allowing to show.

You see the only problem is that The CRA is a acronym for the Clan Restoration Act (from fanfics) restoration being in the name never mind that the in this world we are set in the times of warring states period with Ninja being the work horses/back bone behind their respective dyimo (can’t spell it for the life of me) if it was an act it would have to be something of new beginnings clans as I know it in this veurse have a history/leinege associated unless the mc has a clan name behind in his ancestors viable for Ninjas (like the Hatake or so) the CRA method would not be to me at least viable for story telling but this is a Fanfiction so aurthor if you are reading this go wild and put in what you want it is how I see story’s finish’s and not left in the dust (suggestions are fine voting is tricky territory IMO)

It is not for voting purposes just suggestion (before the author slaps me through the screen)

Well just because no one has asked let’s put in the famous trio Kushina, Mikoto Uchiha, Tsunade before it is to late which I think it is.