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Hey Muzan how about attaching a link of the original translation? Or Do you fear people not reading from me.

Yes, someone?

Raw Translation Link??

It's fascinating and I recommend giving it a try! ... ... .. ... ... ... .. Ciao Adios . .. ... .... ..... ...... ...... ......... ....... ....... ...... ........ ........ ........ ....... ....... ......... .......... ........

Raw Translation Name Please???

This fanfic would've been better if it had some good grammar, anyway I'm quitting it for now .... .... ..... . . . .

Tsk Tsk- That's why you should listen to your seniors

Starting was a little bad with how a 8-old went to war and did all those things still it was pretty solid and later on got pretty interesting

I liked it and I think you should give it a try: Read atleast 15 chaps before deciding instead of deciding to miss out on the fun while listening to some idiots cuz I nearly did and hope you won't until you try it on your own

Premise is good but execution lacks depth and comes off as cringe and childish uk that of a egoistical maniac who tries to act badass but comes off kinda stupid, all in all- it's definitely worth a try, but it just didn't suit my taste. Oh yeah im a legitimate RI prick! Great Love Immortal Venerable~!

This guy really has a thing for reincarnation it seems as none of his fanfics have them:? ..... ...., .... .... .... ..... . .. .... ....

I think there's nothing wrong with introducing English tbh and let's be clear here he's no mad genius and if we go as per he say then in the future we'll be isolated cuz c'mon bro English has become a common language for a reason. It's foolish of you to accuse him as he's doing what he can to help and atleast with English he has a comprehensive way to develop the education system to our likings

I'm kind of disappointed; I mean I'm not saying that the idea is bad but it feels the story is unrealistic for the most part and the interaction between characters is just straight out weird with lots of unfamiliar terms at that point time furthermore it feels rushed and those interviews at the start was awkward- I think you should pay more attention to details and making it more realistic and engaging and that is clearly lacking. It'd be better to showcase problems of caste system and how to solve these first then go ahead with military part while also taking care of nobles which are more of a tumor. I've read another Indian novel- (India that could be by Maddymudda) So I had great expectations! Nice try to be honest much appreciated as I too hail from the south so it's quite fascinating to read this novel which has great potential, I would really like it if you could attempt a rewrite or something to attract more audience.

He's a coward- I don't know why so many people gave such high reviews anyway I didn't like the mc but overall the world building and story is good

I disagree as writing another great Got fic like this one would get you many readers and you'll get to earn some bucks too

Lmao 🤣 God level ideas and chinese level execution..

It was fun, I mean I'm talking about the above comments atleast I felt it was worth it 🤣 As far as a the novel goes: lemme give it a try- I'm optimistic anyway I'll update it after reading it

I disagree, it's certainly a masterpiece if you compare it to any other ASOIF/GOT fan fics. I skipped it after reading this guy's comment but later gave it a try now I'm giving this review after finishing volume 1