Andrew_Hall_6400

6mth

Commented

You should introduce The Nameless or Shrii-ka-rai (Eaters of the Force), as they are creatures that preyed on Force-sensitive individuals

ch 36 The Lost Fett

Predator of Star Wars: Hunt

Movies · GoldDragonMachina

Andrew_Hall_6400

6mth

Replied to Andrew_Hall_6400

Readers*

ch 13 Chapter 13

Building an Empire in Game of Thrones

War · Dr_Dred

Andrew_Hall_6400

6mth

Commented

Good story so far. Just a quick suggestion when you do an authors note please put it in either brackets or parentheses so that way the reads can distinguish between the two and not get confused.

ch 13 Chapter 13

Building an Empire in Game of Thrones

War · Dr_Dred

Andrew_Hall_6400

6mth

Replied to holson_Charles

I just read a book that was dumber than this because in 30 chapters that author did not add a single status point to his MC’s strength and just though that speed and dexterity would be simply sufficient

Rise of the White Dragon

Fantasy · Lruska

Andrew_Hall_6400

6mth

Commented

Overall story is okay but really almost thirty chapters and the MC didn’t increase his strength. Does the author think that strength isn’t needed for a bow?

ch 29 Running away