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So far this story has been good. What I can say about your story, Author, is that your story is good but you need to fix up your grammar and spelling. You should read your own story to find the mistakes/things that need to be fixed in your story so that you can see how to improve a certain scene/line. You don't need to take this to heart or anything but I just wanted to give you some constructive criticism even though it might be unnecessary. Anyways I've been loving the story!

Accidently deleted my previous comment on this chapter but here's my comment. Wonderful chapter! Looking forward to more exciting chapters!

I caught up :'), I love this work! This story really manages to make me cry. I'm looking forward for more updates soon!