Klankon - Profile

The novel has a lot of potential, but the author seams to be making stuff up as he goes, forgets about things(buying house and car in rl), he forgets about skill level(divine blade), we never learn about what lvl the mc is after the initial chapters etc. The fact that the mc takes almost every woman he meats into the bead despide having a gf is also questionable. Please take some time to check what you write, the novel has great potential but rushing it is destroying it.

It starts good, but towards the end it becomes stupid. The outer demons attack because of Jin is plain stupidity, if they left the planet alone he would have no reason to kill them. The story had allot of potential that was never used.

One of the rare novels where I don't need to skip chapters so far, because they are boring. The Storry is excellent but the attitude of the MC where he loses track of everything else around him when he is in a fight is a bit stupid.

First impression, MC is stupid, never bothers to learn other skills aside from the balls grab one, when he could get new Skills, he goes on to piss of people that can easily kill him, does not bother learning details about cultivation stages, he completely wstes the system by not using it to it's full potential,all in all trash MC. Hope it gets better in later chapters.

i˙m at 104 atm and getting ready to drop this shit. Emperor wants him dead and he says, he wanted to meat him? WTF the dumbest thing i ever heard. And if the story does not go into another country as soon as he escapes i˙m droping it, because staying in the country governed by the king/emperor who wants to kill you or even potentialy going to a banquet he hosts is the dumbest thing ever. The author seriously disapoints me.