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Tama_Kun
male LV 3New Novelist
2022-12-11 Joined IndonesiaBadges 6
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people dislike if you make the dialogue like that, don't ever use : but just use "ABC"Samuel claps shania's shoulder and greets him "Hey bro" then he continue "Wanna take a lunch together"Shania looks at Samuel's smiles and it make his heart beating so fast "s-sure" he replied.
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too long for one paragraph, make one paragraph consist only 3-5 sentances
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thanks for your comment, I hope you enjoy the story
On my way to the adventure guild, I met my childhood friend, Zelta. She lived near my house and had the same fate as me; we had both lost our parents. Zelta had long, straight, silver hair, silver eyes, white skin, and a slim body. She was beautiful to me, and I wanted to protect her smile.
The World that I Wish
Fantasy 路 Tama_Kun
good concept . I do love the way you make Phoenix as the concept
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well, Al himself only love zelta, but he don't have enough braveness to confess. In other side, Zelta always give him a signal that she love Al, but Al never realized it. What will happen in the future? will Al realize that Zelta loves him? Let's enjoy the story
ch 0 2 My Adventurer Test
The World that I Wish
Fantasy 路 Tama_Kun
Thank you for reading. I do understand that the early chapter is not enough good because I still newbie in that time. I hope you can still enjoy the story.
ch 0 3 A Promise to Keep Memories of Family and the Will to Move Forward
The World that I Wish
Fantasy 路 Tama_Kun
Thank you for reading
ch 0 3 A Promise to Keep Memories of Family and the Will to Move Forward
The World that I Wish
Fantasy 路 Tama_Kun
thanks for remind me. I see that I Made a mistake. since the early chapter I still learning to make a novel.
"Firstly, there are rank systems in the Adventure Guild," the receptionist continued. "The lowest ranks are Chopper, Silver, Gold, Diamond, Onyx, and Ruby. You can only take quests that are suitable for your rank.
The World that I Wish
Fantasy 路 Tama_Kun
I think for cultivation story, this is enough good. so I recommended to other reader to enjoy this story
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Yes, it start from 1st of Sep. Thanks for asking
ch 91 Prince Allium's Battle Speech
The World that I Wish
Fantasy 路 Tama_Kun
Ethan.... I think all author in WN run out of name for male MC. almost every novel I opened, and I find Ethan 馃槀
Ethan Bunnies stood on his balcony, his eyes fixed on the distant horizon, disbelief etched on his face. Confusion clouded his mind, his heart heavy with the weight of unfamiliarity. Where was he? How had he come to be in this world? These questions echoed within him, unanswered and elusive.
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