(A/N: In case it's not clear, this is no longer virtual, and the game has become reality, though the players have no way of knowing that. Since there'll probably be confusion, I'll just say it: all non-players have been exterminated, the game (by that I mean my heavily, heavily altered version) has become reality (the players can't be sure of that fact), and the world itself is heavily altered. Hope that clears up any confusion.)
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Luo Ming was barely able to catch his breath as the other boys caught up to him. "Brother Tian, you caught the rat?" one of them said, patting Tian on the back. "It's only natural that a hunter can herd their prey, after all."
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Writing has improved a lot, hope you keep it going this time.
I wandered through the streets, taking in the sights and sounds of the town. The architecture was distinctly Japanese, with red-tiled roofs and stone lanterns lining the streets. The town was bustling with activity, as people went about their business and chatted with each other. I felt a pang of curiosity and wanted to learn more about this place, but I quickly shook it off. I didn't want to draw attention to myself, and I didn't want to make any Japanese friends. I was here to survive, and that was all that mattered.
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I like this version, much improved. Fights are better
ch 0 8 Mirroring Swordsmen
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Well worth it.
ch 0 4 Truly Luckless
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Guess who's back, back again?
ch 0 1 Preamble
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I like how Yui sounds more Japanese. Good luck dealing with Silica this time!
ch 0 3 Re-Evaluation
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Good chapter, keep going!
ch 12 Healing
Hegemony
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