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Love how you wrote the whole scene with the lanterns and the symbolism of Hirrow following a fallen star because it reached its destination in his moment of insecurity. I think you have a real talent for writing descriptions :D Good job

Cool, I think you should self-publish when you finish this book, it's super well-written and I love how eloquently you portray the character's point of view on different topics.

OML!!!! What a story :O Dang that's some top notch writing! Is it alright if I message you? And you're amazing at setting up a scene btw I was on the edge of my seat when I read his friend's backstory

Aww his poor friend... I felt really bad for him. You nailed conveying emotions in this chapter.

i just love the way you write, it's calming to read and I can easily picture what's going on thanks to the descriptions. I like how you ended the chapter too

Yes, you're on point with that! It definitely needs more editing ^_^