Nice work, Zeta Faes! I have an advise though, don't be too focused on your main character. You put your character into the position where he could transport from one world to another. Explore both world! That would be interesting to see how the two worlds developed there.Overall, it is a nice story. I hope you can keep it up!
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Nice work, Zeta Faes! I have an advise though, don't be too focused on your main character. You put your character into the position where he could transport from one world to another. Explore both world! That would be interesting to see how the two worlds developed there.Overall, it is a nice story. I hope you can keep it up!
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