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I only read female lead.

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I like that it slows down the pace a little so you can think properly about what you want. At this rate it seemed like he would run out of things to do after becoming strong enough.

A/N: Akira is finally lowering his walls a bit and letting others take a peek into a bit of his heart, and how much this one conversation mattered to Akira will be revealed later. What did you think about this chapter? I would love to know.

Necromantic Gamer's Journey(DxD)

Necromantic Gamer's Journey(DxD)

Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck

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???

"He promised to teach me Fire Style, but he postponed again," Sasuke said under his breath stubbornly, his disappointment evident. Itachi always does this to me.

Gojo Satoru: Reborn as an Uchiha

Gojo Satoru: Reborn as an Uchiha

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I'm sure Naruto wasn't one to two years old in that scene, so you screwed something up with the timeline.

Satoru leaned over, skillfully catching a mask about to hit the blond boy's face. The few remaining, who hadn't dispersed, looked at the blindfolded boy approaching the demon fox, sparking a flurry of discussions.

Gojo Satoru: Reborn as an Uchiha

Gojo Satoru: Reborn as an Uchiha

Movies · ricardo_yammouni

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In general I like this fanfic. It's nice to read. I like that the crossovers with JJK are Slice of Life. That gives you the opportunity to throw in the funniest characters from as many worlds as you want without making a mess of the supernatural world or the power systems. The writing is very good in my inexperienced opinion, I have no problems with the flow and the dialogues. I don't have anything good to say about the characters or the world because I don't know where the franchises come from except for JJK. All the good things said now my complaints. The protagonist is nice, but I don't know if it's too early for me to say this, but I think she lacks personality. It's not bad, just a little bland. I think she could use some good/bad habits to give her more spark. Smoking, eating a lot, poor orientation, OCD, any nonsense you can think of would make her more memorable. In writing I think it would be better if you avoided putting your exposition comments in between, it takes it out of the immersion a bit.Speaking of taking out of the immersion... Honestly, everything about the ROB could very well be removed and everything would be better. Honestly it just complicates things and expands the universe more than necessary and it makes everything feel...useless. Finally...the system. I have no problem with there being a system, just with it being so unnecessarily informative. Having said all that...I hope my rant doesn't down you or anything, I'm just writing the things I didn't like and I'll take the opportunity to leave a review. Do what you want and I will continue reading because in general I like this fanfic.

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Oh yeah, go lie to one of the most intelligent beings in the world, it sure works. I don't understand her need to do something in such a hurry. Toga's parents were bad, but they never physically abused her or denied her basic needs. Why throw away a perfectly settled life for a plan to avenge a girl (Toga) that she doesn't know?

Himiko: 'What if I 'coincidentally' find myself at UA and tell Nezu that I was kidnapped and experimented on to make a human weapon capable of killing All for One? This would explain my multiple quirks in case anyone notices, I could also garner enough sympathy from Nezu as a 'fellow' experiment to possibly not be questioned by the detective, and finally for the best part if he asks if I want to go back to 'my' parents I could say that they abused me!'

MHA: The Fresh Blood

MHA: The Fresh Blood

Anime & Comics · The_Fae_Child

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Boring I guess.

Todoroki strategized, 'What I have to do,' Bakugo's determination blazed, 'is snatch her headband,' Izuku's resolve echoed, 'For one million points.' Simultaneously, they all thought, 'That's how I'll win!' Each competitor focused intensely on the shared goal, setting the stage for an electrifying and fiercely competitive showdown.

Supergirl in MHA

Supergirl in MHA

Anime & Comics · BlooBlooBloo

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