Wonderful story, interesting plot and great world building but you could improve on your grammar aspects I noticed places where you would write "what do mean" and things like this make it hard to read but still it's a nice book
Fantasy · Rossi_billionz
Thanks I really appreciate it
Thanks 👍 I really appreciate it and I try to improve on it
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Wonderful story, interesting plot and great world building but you could improve on your grammar aspects I noticed places where you would write "what do mean" and things like this make it hard to read but still it's a nice book
Azaki : the devil warrior
Fantasy · Rossi_billionz