Dao_May

All in all this novel quality is great. The author has a way of making the world and characters feel alive . The amnesia arc was something I'm not fond of at first, but it was not that long and to be honest , I was glad that I read through it because it answered some of my questions and add additional lore in the story . So far the latest chapters are all awesome . The world building element is solid now , and seeing the MC's cool side was addicting . This story is a gem. There are no dull moments , and those twist and revelations hit like a bomb. It's the type of story where I need to read everything because I'm afraid that I will miss an important info for future chapters.

Lunar Supremacy: Moonlight Overlord

Urban · MZAF

Dao_May

11mth

Commented

I'm guessing another old fling ?

ch 150 Frozen in Time

Lunar Supremacy: Moonlight Overlord

Urban · MZAF

Dao_May

11mth

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 0 1 Chapter 1 - Prologue

Age of Relics

Fantasy · shypotattoo

Dao_May

11mth

Commented

Good first chapter . This one has potential

ch 0 1 Chapter 1 - Prologue

Age of Relics

Fantasy · shypotattoo

Dao_May

11mth

Commented

You keep repeating words in one paragraph . That's instant turn off.

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System Zet: Become the emperor of entertainment

Urban · Aztecs9

Dao_May

11mth

Commented

Perfect example of showing how MC can still be outsmarted despite his OP speed. And Him choosing to check on Nathan first was perfect . I'm really impressed by how well written your characters are .

ch 147 Inside Job

Lunar Supremacy: Moonlight Overlord

Urban · MZAF

Dao_May

11mth

Commented

The way you explain how cold slow down MC's speed was great . It just show your attention to details.

ch 146 Deadly Combinations

Lunar Supremacy: Moonlight Overlord

Urban · MZAF

Dao_May

11mth

Commented

Good job author. I been binge reading this one and I was not disappointed .

ch 146 Deadly Combinations

Lunar Supremacy: Moonlight Overlord

Urban · MZAF

Dao_May

11mth

Commented

I don't want to be that guy , but your writing need some improvements. The story is interesting but I need quality writing if I'm going to continue reading ...

ch 0 3 Everything I wanted.