MasterAkash

7mth

Commented

Hey there was something about 12 hours flashback, but it's been 2years and he is still not there where he is dying.

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Necromancer Of The Shadows

Fantasy · Zero_writer

MasterAkash

8mth

Commented

First the MC gets frightened by the apperance of system, that he almost got a stroke.But after some time he remembers that he read in novels about system and gets excited. Common bro there is no logic here.

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Neurolink System in the Modern World

Urban · InnocentFox

MasterAkash

8mth

Posted

This is my first time writing a review. Let's start with the review, The first few chapters were good about the MC background n'allBut after that other characters development is not that good and story is fast paced, In fights first he panics and after taking a beating he starts laughing, there is no logic in that.And last but not least in chapter something around 30 he gets beaten by the church people and is badly injured But he does nothing, Not even getting angry like why did they attack him, He didn't do anything they just attacked him cause some history about his race.Common bro like really there is no feel when I'm reading this novel.This is my honest review. You can try and see who knows you might like it.