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On the contrary, this is a +18 story with almost nothing +18, including one of my dissatisfactions, it's like a story with a comedy genre but without comedy, only now it has a bit of ero and it's already been 200 chapters...

Human morality is not indicative of maturity, in fact morality itself is ambiguous and depends on the country in which you are.

And they are also blood relatives

That's good, rin should have mc or no one, it would be weird otherwise

No, no no no, that would turn my stomach so much that I wouldn't be able to continue reading

This is unpleasant, I hope she stays with MC or Shirou, if there is none it would be better for her to be single until the end of the series, it would be very frustrating to see Rin with another guy, my heart would hurt a lot

but once, the arc had no purpose, initially I thought that the MC would go on vacation and then force himself to solve his family problems, but no... then I thought he would develop romantic relationships, but no... then I thought he would become stronger... none of that happened, he also didn't develop his personality, his personality was much better at the beginning of the work with the promise of traveling the world and making a harem with courage, but that wasn't it. ..so what is the purpose of this arc? Show how lethargic he is? How is he no longer willing to try to nurture feelings and eventually love a woman?

Honestly the MC at the beginning seemed much more stable, now he is irritating, hesitant and full of melancholy, author there is something called a proposal, every story presents a proposal in the beginning, the proposal of this story was an MC casually getting involved here and there and so if you wanted to stay with something for a long time he would slowly build up feelings, now he doesn't get involved casually with any woman and isn't even willing to harbor feelings, you basically deceived the readers, besides this entire arc was wasted, not the purpose in it, are you on vacation? They are meaningless, in fact it seems that the MC has become worse or instead of better and the story is becoming frustrating

Yes, but don't forget that she is a demon, maybe you are thinking too much about human common sense, when she is a demon

So don't read any stories with harem, resolved, or you keep constantly complaining that you don't want to see a harem while reading a story with the harem tag?

Wasn't he going to learn swordsmanship?

in fact, she is not in a medieval world where making a harem is not uncommon, she is a human woman with common human sense, right?

I don't think if she could have children that would stop him from having a harem, he is brave enough to propose a goddess, do you think he would be afraid to make a harem simply because he wanted one?

Dude, it's okay that the narration isn't that good, but the lines aren't... you have to do the lines right

The lines are killing the scenes. First, conjugate the lines at least... Also, use "" instead of zeus:

If it is in a vacuum, it can almost reach the speed of light

leave bell as it is, no reason to change, and it would be nice to have the original bell otherwise it would be like the world revolves around mc and that would break the immersion of being in danmachi

Helping people if there is no problem is really a good thing, imagine if everyone did it? Helping people before helping yourself is... brain dead

Naturally the way you write dialogues will be different from the original author, but don't forget that this is a medieval era and these people don't speak like that either in the medieval era or in the history of danmachi...