No problem just a honest talk I know you’ll do better 😁🍀 👌🏽🙏🏽
Fantasy · Chibueze_eze
Well first of all 🥹 it’s a good story and I totally believe it’s gonna become better the author just have to give more attention to the story narration as well as it’s structure and be more extensive on the description, flexible even. Also proof reading would go a long way in looking for ways new ways to bring the novel good audience 😊😊 Good job author keep up the good work and do not shake no matter what Vibemagic @echo9ja 👌🏽
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Sci-fi · Echo9ja
🥹🥹🥹🥹 just awesome 👏 love the starting point hhh I just wish…. hhh never mind🥲
Urban · Vellyna_Yari09
I just started reading it and it was great so far. good luck author 😁😁👊👍👍
Sci-fi · vimbaimurindagomo
thanks
Thank you sir 😉😉 I will
Wow...I... I don't know what to say...😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶 The book is just.... Wow wow wow right on track from the very beginning wow good job 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
Fantasy · Dessy_Success
Yeah the story is great good improvement but there is room for more growth good work ♥️♥️♥️😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Fantasy · Tama_Kun
this book is awesome I Just started it and by the way, good work author 😁😁😉😉
Fantasy · ash_knight17
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
No problem just a honest talk I know you’ll do better 😁🍀 👌🏽🙏🏽
SAYA (I AWOKE WITH THE LEGENDARY MOONSLAYER IN MY HAND)
Fantasy · Chibueze_eze