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why stopped the update? it's a good start and we all have the same dislike about what author did to leon even tho if any one were to be in victor's place with his power and all they most likely will do worst...anyway it's a good start wish there was more chapters with good plot

i got you bro but i just can't come to like her even if you guys saw (yandere potential) in her like if you re-read carefully you'll find that the only reason she didn't have s*x with that guy is just because the mc enter the room(she was top naked and kissing while waiting for him to pen*etrate her and in her pov she said it clearly that she enjoyed his touch...) well my point is that the mc has many pure girl that loved him dearly so there's no point for her to be in his life again as a lover.except that maybe some poeple here don't mind such a messed up situation like this one and are fine with someone like her as a partner

so much for a guy who's wife cheats on him in the past... when you try that pain i don't believe any normal guy would do the same to another man who did him good(let his wife take care of him without any complain and with his own money) the point is his personality in the first ch and now is way different.and no way any woman would accept someone telling her to let him bang her that fast

oh i see bro, i mean no offense i just found it weird how clingy he was to ayano lol

umm is it me or the mc is acting more like ayanokoji's girlfriend more than a bro.it just feel weird when he tried to satisfy him with do you want that koji-kun... koji-kun this

author bro you are one big cuck out there to make such a thing.that's just a beta cuck life drama

the story is great but this kind of happy go lucky naive mc who supposed to be 40 yo with calculative mind isn't for me.heck he never bother to suspected what those so called gods tell him. just a yes madam naive guy

that was epic fight scene.thanks for the chapter

he's too much whiny for someone who wants power. why not REALLY try to ccontrole he cursed energy instead of wasting time complaining to no one

i wrote a fu**ing article lol ranting here cuz i'm damn disappointed in myself for wasting so much time in this one just for author to pull something like that.unfortunately i don't have time otherwise i would like to wrote a fanfic with the (inner voice)thing without a failure like this mc

bruh it's your brain's circuit that is broken... they already hear issei intent in killing the guards outside and even though sona is devil she isn't that evil who let her people die like garbage out there yet she sit down with him and her parent eating and blushing like nothing happend?? okay here maybe you were confused but neg*a what about giving one of the op spells of anos to them like it's some candy...really? if it was that easy to master and being able to do it why won't anos make a freaking organisation just by giving whatever he can to his friends (women). and it really takes the term (special) from mc by doing that.just like how he's using shadow garden on something stupid...the point is this chapter up tell now was the worst and the most annoying.